Reviews for Hook, Line, and Sinker
Guest chapter 14 . 5/1/2019
This was such a good chapter! I really love how you portray all the characters and your writing is so good :) Berwald and Tino need to just kiss and get it over with
Guest chapter 14 . 5/1/2019
Ahh, that was so good! Your writing is so good and I love how you portray all the characters. Berawald Tino just need to kiss already.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/2/2019
Oh my god that chapter was so good! I feel so bad for Tino
Estrellas chapter 13 . 1/2/2019
Oooh! Poor Tino :(
This makes me even more curious about his past, his home, his family... and eager for him to one day have a baby of his own! This story is so captivating, I can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 12 . 11/16/2018
This was so good, I love this story so much and your writing is amazing! keep up the hard work :)
Guest chapter 11 . 7/10/2018
Ahhh, this was so good. I loved this chapter so much :) I hope you keep writing.
NordicsAwesome chapter 10 . 5/30/2018
I love this chapter! It was really interesting to meet Lukas and Emil’s parents, and I’m so excited about their new case! I’m also very intrigued by the mentions of Berwald’s past - I hope we get to find out more later on. Can’t wait for the next update!
Tapdancing Worm chapter 10 . 5/24/2018
Ahhh! Love it love it love it! I really hope you update soon! You're the BEST!
Guest chapter 10 . 3/4/2018
Ahhhhh, their taking the case. I can't wait for the next chapter, it is going to be so much fun to see how everyone works together, especially with Tino there as well.
Anonymous chapter 10 . 2/9/2018
mmmMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
GODS I love it so much when you update! This story is so warm and interesting it makes me quake to read! The chapters are delightfully long, and I know I'll be thinking bout this one for at least 3 days! I! Love! It! So! Much! I can't WAIT for the next chapter!
Cone of Depression chapter 10 . 2/9/2018
Ahh, I didn't realize how much Tino disliked the hospital... Everything's better with freedom~! :D
I'd sWEAR you'll end me with your DenNor moments ;3 It's just so refreshing how you write them~!
But shopping with Tino! I laughed so much when he was trying on shoes. And the thrift store! AND the shenanigans with Mathias~ xDDDD Let's just say that Tino will definitely be ready when Leon has clothes for him~
The merman story was just lovely! Plus we get to see more of Tino's motherlyness~ (Emil shall forever be their child x3)
Meeting their parents definitely changed up this story. I like the way you presented them~ We get to see new perspectives, as well as how Lukas and Emil turned out c:
Shalalalalala my oh my, Berwald's realizing his developing feeeeeelings~! ;)))))
Ooooooooooo, can't can't wait to see how Tino will participate in their next case! (*0*)/
NordicsAwesome chapter 9 . 1/14/2018
Oh my God, I just found this story and I absolutely love it! Like seriously, this is the best thing I’ve read this year. Prepare for a monster review...

Firstly, the characterisation in this is incredible. I love the family dynamic between the characters (their banter is hilarious!), especially Lukas and Mathias’ relationship, and the way that Berwald is a sweet protective mother hen. The way you write Tino is amazing; I love how you’ve really developed him as a character by creating everything about his backstory and culture and species. This could so easily have been just any other merman au, but the effort you’ve put into the details makes it something very special.

Secondly, this whole paranormal investigators au is my new favourite thing! I can totally imagine each of the characters in their roles, especially Lukas and his connection to the supernatural. And the blogging and livestream stuff is really cool. Once again, I love how you’ve really developed all the background to their career with stories of their past adventures (maybe sometime you might write a sequel/prequel including some of that? it would be awesome if you did). This whole au is just so convincing and planned out, it’s incredible.

Ahem...yeah. Basically I just really love this fic, please write more! :)
Cone of Depression chapter 9 . 1/13/2018
Happy New Year! :DDD
And Leon's dreams became true, meeting Tino, cutting his hair AND designing for him~ C;
Ah, our disbelieving doctor, he doesn't watch much YouTube, does he? XD Though Tino could claim that his markings are tattoos, honesty is the best policy after all~
Talking about feet, super cute~ :3
20alma02 chapter 8 . 12/24/2017
Ahh!, this is so good I just read it all in one day. I really hope you continue it :)
Cone of Depression chapter 8 . 11/7/2017
Yayayay, you've updated again~! :DDD
Kiku finally made his appearance! :)
Hmm, wonder how much they'll donate for a sick merman? :o
Slightly possessive Berwald is sweet too~!
Ahhh, DenNor calming methods, definitely fits them~ w
Daww, Leon just wants to be a fashion designer x3
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