so are you going to continue this or not?

I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

Dang I was hoping for a new chapter but I guess every good thing must come to an end.

does lizzy know that they have wings?

a hand made of black sand

Can you please separate this into paragraphs?

I hate martin

Lost Prince

how is that racist? it's just descriptive.

It’s fine life happens take care of yourself first

...I mean... a few more thank you wouldn’t have hurt... I’m just kidding:)
I know what it’s like to suddenly not find the time you want so you can write, but hopefully you can continue updating soon.
Also congrats on writing on your own book. Even if it’s not finished, I’m sure it will be fantastic!
Your friend,
KitoH

That's not racist, just fact

Ever heard of paragraphs?

Hello so I'm afraid that I lost my Notebook with the rest of this story and I have no clue how to continue also I haven't been feeling inspired. I have been writing more Harry Potter and Percy Jackson stories. If I can convince myself that their good enough I might post. Could anybody lend me an idea? I'd appreciate it. And to guest on chapter 1 I don't care if you think I need more paragraphs! It's how I write and you could have reveiw nicer. If you don't have anything nice to say don't say anything at all!

It's a good story idea but grammar, punctuation, and spacing needs to be worked on.
–Good luck.
YA