Story abondoned?

A sweet end to the chapter

His getting stinko is a pretty bad sign in and of itself. Looks to me as if here's another world in which Dear Old Mom and Dear Old Dad need a wake-up call.

I wonder how long it will take for someone to notice the blind spot she has as regards her 'precious little angels.'

I also wonder what it will cost her.

Looking forward to the next one.

Your welcome and I will

Well, it's not much, but it's something at the least.
I hope to see more in the future.
Keep up the good work.

Sweet start

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE LET LUCY NOT BE BASHED!

Nice story. For some sick reason, I really like story's like this. Mabye it's because I wait for the payoff for the characters that are bashed, I'm not sure. I really hope you continue.