Reviews for The White Storm of The Uzumaki Clan |
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SPeCTeR-ll7 chapter 12 . 8/2 I vote fore kurotsuchi. |
Shit fic chapter 12 . 8/2 Wat an absolute garbage of a fanfic. This shitty self insert mary sue OC is nothing but a bastard rape baby who neither minato or kushina would hesitate to abort such a disgusting half breed instead of your premise in this crack fic of yours even going as far as having kushina making this half breed rape baby a clan heir. Kushina being the ninetails jinchtuuriki and having her chakra chains that can hold the kyuubi down would destroy this shitty oc uchiha who raped her or would go into kyuubi rage and rip him apart, there would be nothing his sharingan can do to surpress kyuubi unless kushina herself was willing to surpress kyuubi, let’s also not forget the hiriashin seal that Minato has incorperated in kushina seal for her safety and would teleport right at kushina and cleave this shit uchiha in half. This fic shows how little you know about canon manga material or choose to ignore it to have a forced way to self insert your shitty OC into the story. Absolute garbage fic, it’s no surprise that there are so little reviews, doesn’t also help the fact that it’s so badky formated and badly written. Do us all a favor and delete this garbage story |
lara5170 chapter 11 . 3/24 This is interesting and I'm looking forward to reading more. |
W01frunn3r chapter 11 . 3/7 This was a great read. I like your OC and I have read most of your other stories and I cannot wait for you next story. |
thunderofdeath97 chapter 1 . 12/18/2019 i thought naruto was the older brother not sme fucking pumped up oc sorry but i dislike ocs |
Fanficlover2017 chapter 2 . 12/8/2019 Your is story is good but you have Minato portrayed as a p**sy without a spine of any kind this needs to change. He is hokage not the civilian and elder councils whipping boy. |
Irina Akashira chapter 12 . 9/21/2019 Ty for the update Anyway, I'm not sure to be clear If I've understood correctñy,hte new Mizukage and Kirigakure has put Mei in the Bingo Book Anyway, I can see no sense For the canon and most fanfics, the bingo book is an "official" wanted posters compilation, avaiable all around the world And sometimes, a rich individual cans post a bounty for someone other, but a village shouldn't do, except this objective either be a missin-nin (desertor) and/or s/he has done some crime against the country It has no sense for a banished, like your Mei or Naruto in many stories In fact, many fanfics, a banished Naruto or Naruko, do his/her best to avoid to kill his/her persecutors, no risk to give them an excuse to put him/her in bingo book, or simply, blame him/her with false charges, which in some fanfic said or implied to violate some international law In my opinion, putting someone in a bingo book, is more a mean of "bullying" than really wishing to capture someone, doing that this person be persecuted either rival villages or bounty hunters And if they (a village) were to aim to really capture someone, either post as an official mission for their ninjas or command to the ambus |
Primarx chapter 12 . 9/21/2019 ty 4 another interesting chapter |
Earthly Entity chapter 11 . 8/12/2019 After reading, I can say I lost interest. You place a bit too much reference from other animes also a bit ooc for me. Though I'm curious as to why not place this fic with the crossovers as xover? |
Fanficlover2017 chapter 11 . 8/12/2019 Love this fic! Must have more! Update soon please! |
Fanficlover2017 chapter 3 . 8/12/2019 Either mei, hana or mikoto either will work! |
Irina Akashira chapter 11 . 8/6/2019 Ty for the update |
Autismguy593 chapter 11 . 8/5/2019 I like it. |
Autismguy593 chapter 10 . 7/21/2019 I like it. |
Primarx chapter 10 . 6/18/2019 ty 4 the chapter |