A freaking mazing as always. Your chapter wore me out and all I did was read. This chapter was so full of tension, I couldn’t get through it fast enough. I’m excited for the next chapter! Happy writing!

Omg that hag I’m so upset about ren/Kuon n Lory being taken in to Custody and Kyushu Julie n Kyoko how are they going to get through this loved it

omg I can't wait for more! Thanks so much! I'm on the edge of my seat!

Thank you!

I’m not gonna lie, it was a struggle for you to write because it was hella emotional, my heart “they caught him by the wings and he couldn’t fly away” that’s a beautiful line and I love it. I felt Kuon’s stress and Kyoko’s heartbreak. Well done ma’am, well done.

Yay, so much progress! Secrets revealed.

Yay for everyone! :3

Omg that was a heavy chapter. How did they find out about Ren?

I’m glad that the Hizuris know about Kyoko’s relationship to Kuon now, but I wish it wasn’t under these circumstances.

whoops indeed :D nice chap btw :D thumbs up to you!

Ahhhh I’ve reread this chapter five times now since it came out...
I really love this part:
"Oh Kuon." Her voice broke on his name. "They caught you by the wings and you couldn't fly away."
Thanks for the amazing chapter! Can’t wait until the next one!

Secrets are being revealed! Can’t wait to find out what is going on and how much Kyoko’s going to reveal! Thanks for the chapter.

You were not kidding when you said you were bringing the pain with this one! x_x

I want to know what's next
Update soon please
You're talented really

Magnífico!...ahora lucha otra vez para escribir lo que viene...kyoko puede salvarlos?

I want my babies to reunite, they miss each other soooo much:((((