Well played

Time to Ghost Up, grab his friends, snag the bike, and fly the eff outta dodge.

Throughout All of it just slight errors here and there... Nothing worth mentioning, good work.

Would definitely like to see more of this, seems like you could go a good distance with this story... Just need motivating and inspiration... Hope you find it when and where you can :D

Makes sense

Buena historia , excelente trama ,me gusta el desarrollo de personajes e historia en que se desarrolla la trama , la idea es la mejor que he leído entre este género.

Love the chapter even after the long wait and being honest I understand the delay. Can't wait to see where this goes and how the gang gets their bikes out of this along with themselves...

Well when you have the time pls continue the story it’s one of a kind so far.

I hope that there will be a Danny x Ember lemon in the next chapter.
Will Desiree also join in with Danny x Ember in the story?

Time for Danny to make like a good Halfa and turn himself and Ember invisible faaaaast. XD

Thank you for the update its almost been too long for this fic i love the hole sean you created for this chapter hope to see more soon ;)

Dang even in the past he can't relax without someone being a petty a**-hole about it.

Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and how there relationship will go

I nearly forgot to add but kitty’s pushing is kinda taking it too far like it’s nice that she wants the best for her friends but it’s really forceful on her part and Johnny can be a shitty boyfriend but kitty is kinda manipulative and mean, like in a way it’s heartwarming to know how much he values his gf n tryna be a better guy despite his wandering eyes but his bike isn’t just simply a material thing and her forcing him to bet on it was an ass move no matter whether they had a high chance of winning or not because she understood the sentimental level, if she didn’t it would have been better but she did and made him choose putting him in an uncomfortable position. I mean I would be resentful if my s/o made me bet something I’d also considered irreplaceable no matter the outcome of the bet, so while I do feel bad for kitty for what Johnny did because cheating is a shitty move, but I kinda feel bad for Johnny when she did that. Yeah lot of people doing morally questionable stuff here except Danny(kinda? Because I’m not sure if having sex with people in the past is morally questionable but it really is kinda weird since technically she’d be his mum’s age when he’s in his og timeline if she was still alive) in this chapter and not saying they gotta be perfect people, but it’d be nice if she apologized( and sex isn’t a proper apology I think) or I hope in future chapters it’s implied the money was spent on both of them

I’m sorry but I’m kinda concerned about something ember said to Danny...just because he’s hard doesn’t mean he wants it and I feel like all the peer pressure and tryna convince him even after sayin no repeatedly is kinda creepy and disrespectful towards him as a person and her using that Danny not leaving when he has ghost powers I feel isn’t very justifiable to keep pushing it since he’s the kinda guy that has issues saying no especially to girls and doesn’t want to hurt their feelings and he’s also the type to face things head on rather than run away. He’s a genuinely good guy and it feels like he’s being taken advantage of because if the genders were reversed, it’d come off really weird and creepy and I want to support the relationship dynamic but reading that was off putting, I don’t want to sound like that guy but just my perspective on the situation