So you don't like sasuke and your idea is to give him a harem and redeem him? Seriously? Just kill the idiot off and you'd have done away with the problems. It's very easy to just get rid of him. He's done enough harm to people in the village to warrant being removed and his family has done enough to harm the village many times over with killing the first hokage as well as the kyuubi incident. Killing off their bloodline wouldn't even be frowned on. They might think "oh no, we lost a strong bloodline" but no one would care that much when they realize every member of said bloodline is a traitorous sack of shit responsible for more harm than good for the village. How many people harmed naruto over having the kyuubi stuck in him? Now think what they'd do if they knew the attack was planned by the uchiha? He's the easiest character to get rid of.

You made Ayame dislike Naruto? Isn't that like, not allowed? Also WOW is Kurenai messed up!

The Jiraiya stuff is a bit weird, but enjoying the story otherwise.

Wow, you really wrote Kurenai as a messed up person. Granted, I'm not a huge fan of her (none of the team leaders are any good in canon).

Asuma is coming across a bit creepy, but I suppose all the ninja should come across as rather creepy if you think about it.

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

...Well THAT is a new one...usually Haku, if female, is usually with Naruto, Sasuke, or one of the other genin boys..though it's very rare she's not with Naruto or Sasuke. The sensei pretty much never take her as a lover cause if she's not with one of the genin then she dies at the bridge..having Asuma take her? That's an honest to kami first for me to see. Asuma not with Kurenai isn't that uncommon even though they were canon (till he..ya know, died) but the reason they aren't together is fairly common: Kurenai is a huge prude and overbearing one at that who wants to force her ideals on everyone around her and sees men as perverts even if they never did anything perverted, Asuma on the other hand is while not as openly perverted as I've seen some fics go, he's still open about the fact he knows he's attractive to women and has no problems with using that as seen by how he helped Anko earlier in the story. Thus because of their two very clashing personalities they aren't a couple..like I said, that's a more common thing than you'd expect in fics.

Reading chapters like this makes me wonder how no one sees the depths of Kurenai's misandry. It is, at the very least, worrisome that someone with so much unreasonable hate and despise for boys and men to be out and about.

HA HA HA HA HA HA! ROFLMAOTD! SERIOUSLY?! Pokémon Battles? Talk about a clever way to introduce something from an entirely different franchise in such a way as to avoid creating a crossover of the two. Hilarious! Keep it up, Dood!

I wss greatly disappointed by this story. It has such tremendous potential but pissed it all away. It's not exactly smut, but too detailed to be considered anything but. The story is there but very broken up and sparatic. The concept behind this story is a novel one but simply got taken too fast. Sort of a too much of a good thing scenario.

If you ever do a rewrite, I'd suggest just toning things down. Give fewer tails to people and develop a actual method for them to contain the power since they shouldn't be able to considering there fully developed chakra coils. Maybe something like the seal Tsunade uses. I'd personally get rid of the entire religion of perverts because it's ridiculous and takes things WAY to far.

My only truly personal gripe was giving Ayame to Sasuke. She is way too good for that.

I'm not really loving the idea of giving Asuma that much power. Not to mention his chakra coils could never handle the stain. I'm still confused on how Sakura handled more tails than Hinata. Also, please don't just make the girls sluts. Flirtatious and perverted is one thing. But you've taken it a bit too far a couple of times.

absolutely disgusting you have menyions of pedophilia and child grooming in this is not ok this is sick and if you get your kicks with this CHILD PORN yes child Porn this fiction has mentions of a 80 year old man having relations with a mother and her very young daughter i dont mind lemons i dont mind a lot of stuff but this is borderline illegal and the thing that pisses me off is the story when not focusing on older men taking advantage of young girls is actually one of the better ones ive seen better than this story deserves so reader beware pedophilia and older men molesting young women inside read at your own risk

Espectacular hasta ahora, sólo una incomodidad, algo que cambiar en mi parecer, en el partido sasuke vs ino
Creo que te faltó poner BRUTALITI

While I appreciate a good Naruto story as well as most, I would really like to see PS&S "Completed" even more. Please.

Too many really superb stories have lapsed into "In(de)finite Hiatus" over the years and I fell it would be a shame for PS&S to join that sad group.

Okay the lasr paragraph was a little puny. The story is going quite well and I cannot wait to see what happens next.