Reviews for Procella
Otterly.adorkable chapter 8 . 1/11/2019
Take your time! Grief is a hard thing and we all understand how much pain someone goes through when a loved one has died!
S-Lioness chapter 8 . 1/11/2019
I am sorry for your loss, I hope the pain fades more. Good luck to you and take all the time you need.
gginsc chapter 8 . 1/10/2019
My condolensces and may God give you strength in this trying time. My beloved grandmother died over 30 years ago and it still hurts.
scarlettravencrove chapter 7 . 11/1/2018
Hope you continue this
S-Lioness chapter 1 . 5/27/2018
Well keep simple, she could invite them to her ship to stop everyone from killing Albus for example.
But rly plz plz plz update soon, it's one of my most favourite most awaited stories.
Try to imagine several scenes and see if you like how they go.
Listen to music that you think may fit the scene as a sound effect if it were a movie, make a general summry of how you want the story to go.
S-Lioness chapter 1 . 5/27/2018
Well keep simple, she could invite them to her ship to stop everyone from killing Albus for example.
But rly plz plz plz update soon, it's one of my most favourite most awaited stories.
Try to imagine several scenes and see if you like how they go.
Listen to music that you think may fit the scene as a sound effect if it were a movie, make a general summry of how you want the story to go.
Otterly.adorkable chapter 7 . 3/12/2018
Well the most obvious way would be for Dumbledore and Riddle to follow her home with a tracking spell or something. Or a ritual? Maybe Dumbledore or Riddle did something and they both get taken as prisoners to her boat? They could offend her “father” and he could demand she take retribution but I don’t think that fits his personality. Or they could by chance stumble upon her sailboat by a storm that crashed them there (they could escape from the sailors that captured them because they got suspicious?) or curious exploration.
CHIYuii chapter 7 . 3/4/2018
This is a very interesting story and I am eager and intrigue to read more. Hope for you to update soon!
Heart chapter 7 . 2/18/2018
I hope your friend gets justice! Annnnnd I see no real reason for her to leave...
S-Lioness chapter 7 . 2/8/2018
Ah Dumb dude my least fav character.
I used to love him but as I grew older and re-watched the Movies I started disliking him and finding him suspicious.
RavenCarver chapter 7 . 1/18/2018
This story is... I don't how to describe it but I'd call it refreshing
Caitlin-S-June chapter 7 . 12/16/2017
Love this story! It’s so different and so interesting! So, how to get them on her boat? Well, it seems like this character was trying to diffuse a fight from breaking out. Maybe she’d condone talking with them as long as no one gets hurt? So they’d go speak in her house boat and Dumbledore would convince her she should attend Hogwarts? I’m not sure, but she seems in charge of everyone so, whatever happens, I have a feeling she’ll be in control of Dumbledore and Toms fate.
SassySnowflake16 chapter 7 . 12/14/2017
well dumbled admitted himself that in his youth he was quite arrogant, he didn't change till he defeated grindlewad
reebajee chapter 6 . 12/13/2017
What brought on this side of Dumbledore? Is his beef with Muggles or just sailors? I must say, this portrayal of him is almost completely unrecognizable from the original. Though I do suppose a lot can change in however many years this story is set before the HP series.
reebajee chapter 4 . 12/13/2017
How did she even recognize them? Dumbledore and Riddle I mean.
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