And another one bites the dust :(.

damn over a year with nothing. shame to

Porfa cotinuala
Es una gran historia

I'm enjoying the story- its a slightly different take than what other RWBY crossovers are offering. I would just say that if you do get a beta that would be willing to assist you in your capitalization and punctuation just that small amount of polish would make this 100% more enjoyable! :)

Good luck, and keep writing!

I like this XD
is this abandoned? I hope you will continue this~~

It'd be awesome if the shield would reform into 7 petal swords

You're not adding " 's " to some of the words that have to have it and other reviewers will likely point out the other mistakes you made but other than that, job well done.

I'm liking this even with all of the grammar issues. One critique I can immediately think of is that you really need to capitalize the beginning of your paragraphs and sentences.

My only problem with having Summer die anyway, was the amount of hoops you jumped through, lol. Seems like it ended up being a waste of time having Shirou do all that, only to for her die despite it. Might as well have just kept everything canon with a minor contextual adjustment. Would’ve gotten your idea across just fine and at the same time, helped develop Shirou in this new environment. That’s just my take on it though.

Great job otherwise though, very interesting so far!

ok this just my Idea have his team at beacon made up of his Seavents also have him kinda have group go oh he's nomal one when compaired to Ruby and Yang

make this fanfic a harem with yang in

make this fanfic a harem and put yang in it

make this fanfic a harem

I just stumbled across this story, and I have to say I love the concept. As a player of fate GO and a fan of rwby this crossover is very enjoyable. Keep up the good work and good luck with all of your business IRL.

Side note feel free to add me on fate go, code is 399,510,315
(Iv got merlin)

Aw it would have been hilarious if Ruby ended up having her own servant harem too...or accidentally summoning her own servants...Those Mystic eyes of grimm pwnge are divine in origin and probably run on that same power...