This is just really interesting keep it up

Absolutely fucking retarded go kill your self and take this piece of shit with you

good job, looking foRward to more XD

I just found this story and I like what you have written so far for laying out a starting point. Keep up the good work and here are a few ideas that popped into my head while reading.

Harry could possibly use the reparo and a preservation spells on the books in the library to allow him to study more of the rider history and dragon tactics. This is something any wizard could do and one being a friend of Hermione WOULD do.

If it were me the first thing I would have done is put up some defensive and a notice me ward on the castle. He is in an unknown place and definitely since fighting the beasts he needs to protect them until Morgana gross larger. Now that Morgana is communicating I would try to cast the fidelus over the castle with Morgana as the secret keeper.

Great chapter, can’t wait for more.

Kidding. I see that this hasn’t been updated in over 2 years so I’m hoping you’ll still read reviews. This was a great start to the story. Your Harry and his self awareness to know know that he wasn’t going to be able to help himself getting involved in the struggles of Alagaesia was very well done, his characterization in general seems spot on. If Vrael’s sword and and egg were left behind though, I imagine the leader of the riders would have had eldunari with him. If Galbatorix took them, why did he leave the egg and sword behind? There’s a shortage of good crossovers with these universes, I’m hoping to see you update this at some point.

I like a lot how you developed the characters so far and I hope to see more of this story. I await further updates.

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come o na man update this

This was great. I enjoyed the fact that your harry isn't godlike and clearly will be threatened by his new enemies. and Morgana not being immediately grown up after hatching like in other stories, rather having a time to grow as an individual then springing forth fully mentally developed. this story has a lot of potential, and I'm looking forward to seeing it happen. something to keep in mind: a character and their story are defined by the obstacles before them, and how difficult they are to overcome. if the trials are easily surmounted and antagonists mono-dimesional and weak, the story will be the same. a lot of authors on this site don't seem to grasp this most crucial of rules. I hope there will eventually be more to this story!

This story needs to be updated

WHY HAS THIS STORY SAT HERE PRACTICALLY DEAD? It has been more than a year and a half since you last updated this, the best of your stories. Please get off your ass, leave your other shit piles to rot and FOCUS!

Is there any update on next chapter

this is one of the best Harry potter x-overs I have ever read. The way Harry entered alagaesia is easily believeable and I already see an amazing character in morgana the dragon

Is Harry going to the elves for training? From what I understand he never got any sword training in the HPverse or training in the ancient language.

I like the story, especially the pairing, I suppose you do it like that because Harry is in a way immortal, or at least I hope so.

I liked that Harry not only got a dragon but also because he did it in a special way.

My only thing is that the chapters are quite short, I hope you can make them longer, we read.