Hello. Sorry for not reviewing earlier. Daily life was getting in the way, unfortunately. Anywya, let's get into this review of this final chapter (which review is brought to you by "Lol" and "xD")!

So, Audrey is pitiful and the meets that other girl again... and she's... another priestess? o.O Who thanks her for taking care of Momo? I have a few ideas what this might lead to, but let's see.

Well, I wouldn't call Audrey an excellent master to be honest...

Ghost and spirits, huh?

Okay, I'm confused. Is Momo back? Or is she not back? Or is she back, but she's not back? o.O

Hm... basically one sentence and Audrey goes to Tiffany despite what has hapepened last time? Audrey opinions and decisions could use some stability. :P

Alright, what the hell is going on with the hospital personnel? o.O

Okay... I'm kinda calling Venus...

...and I'm 99% sure I'm right on that one.

Lol, Audrey is impervious to Venus looks/face/charm/curse/whatever-that-si? xD

Heh, only now I've realized that virgin priestesses and love faires are kiiinda in a conflict on interest on the entire sex thing. xD

Lol, Venus scrabbled on hands and feet. Even as far as satisfying revenges go, that seems too mortifying for her. xD

Lol, Audrey wants in? xD I wonder if Tiffany's going to actually agree now.

And... kiss! xD

Okay... Tiffany's much more... thirsty than I expect. I don't mind French kisses, but that escalated fast here...

Lol, kissing was okay, but hug is not? That's so weird to be honest... and then they do hug... xD

Btw. I'm pretty sure Audrey's parents going to be fine with this entire business. xD

Lol, petal/cinder rain. xD

No idea what comm service means in... okay I get it.

Lol, Nikky asks if Tiff and Audrey are together. xD

Lol, Audrey you're trying to fool a smart girl who's getting it on now too... good luck. xD

It kinda would be nice to see more develop between Tiffany and Audrey. I knew we have stuff in the story, but it was from Tiffany's side and kinda hidden. I was honestly thinking you were leaning towards AudreyxMomo thing.

Lol, Nikki using the word "hoe"... and in a nice-ish way. We're come a long way, huh?

Oh, Tiffany is babysitting again?

Lol, Audrey got her hair dyed to match Tiffany's? xD

What was that about pheromones? xD

Heh, so Audrey has defeated her get-away-from-me fear she got from the first story? From this context it kinda seems like It was really story 1 and 3 and 2 was just kinda off-topic. xD

"Special little girl"? o.O

Lol, is that Momo? A ghost? A reincarnation? I'm confused. o.O

Okay, before I forgot I'll ask. Was Momo a ghost from the get go? She could do that wall-trick thing.

Okay, I guess this wraps up this trilogy. I have to be honest here. I was not that great fan of HuniePop, at least not in that context you decided to use in your stories. I'm glad I've read this and you're a very good writer, especially for someone like me for who English (and its slang) is a second language. Your vocabulary and phrases always impressed me. :)

I guess I expected the mood of the stories to be a bit different and I expected more of a finale. I mean this here kinda closes Audrey's story (though not completely, I still don't understand a lot), but I kinda expected also a wrap up of the entire trilogy... and while this can work as that too, I expected more. Did Nikki, Tiffany and Audrey explain to each other their "plotlines"? What about Aiko, Beli, Kyanna and the rest of the cast? What about Kyu?

I don't know if you want to write more or leave it like that.

Anyway, thank you for this long good journey and many luck on your further projects and endeavours... including non-HuniePop- and non-fanfiction-like. And sorry for not being the best reviewer, reader and appreciator.

Take care. :)

—Xellos540

And with this, the Audrey part of the TrioPop series has come to an end, this has been a wild wide that I haven't wanted to get off of. Watching the girl's journey through these past three stories has been a pleasure with a neat little ending with the best ship. every part of this series has kept me invested and wanting to know what happens next. I can't wait to see what Cypher does next.

Alright, Cypher. I'll give ya cred. Ya did damn well with this... Thinking back on the story as I finished this chapter up, I gotta say a lot of this wild ride of a story started clicking... so, well done.

Part 3 is over and what a finish!

I almost feel bad for Venus in the hospital but at same time I don't.

That scene with the senpai-kohai was funny as hell. The girl talking about standard MGs and Audrey s all "what's wrong with you?" Even when she knows its about MGs cuz hey, the girl is still a weirdo stalker, even with 'reveal' of her identity.

Celeste finding out makes sense but I love how Nikki finds out and Audrey can't counter. (Laughs)

All that's left now is the "avengers" story where all three routes/stories meet. XD

Great work with the series.

Signed,

kingpariah

This has been a nice journey.

I'm happy for Audrey and the others.

Im sure there will be other stories. Wonder what Venus plans on doing. Kyu might get in trouble because of Tiffany but who knows.

This.

This was it.

I am a man who has played Kirby star allies to 100% completion, who has seen cosmic megalomaniacs, planet-mining space capitalists, deranged cultists who worship G-rated beezlebub with sacrificial reverence, and existence-ending elder gods of despair, chaos, and hatred, turn over a new leaf, and accepted all that with a smile on my face.

And when I read this chapter, even I knew that the woman who was once Yumi had gone too far this time.

No mercy for those beyond redemption.

The only forgiveness for them...

SHALL BE THROUGH FLAME.

Hello again, it's nice to see another chapter.

So Audrey is doing community service work in a hospital? I was wondering why she was so mean to her mother, when she let her escape the car last time... then a moment later I read Audrey giving her a photo of Celeste and there was a hug. Far from normal on both ends, but it's a progress. Makes me wonder how the father feels (aside from no allowance thing).

Tiff wrote in her text "volunteering"... which means she's using a wrong word or Audrey didn't tell her she's doing community service...

Then again, sobriety checks... nice knowing Audrey didn't try to assault her family alcohol stash... oops...

Lol, two love faires talking about Tiffany thing.

"the black sheep returns" isn't sounding very nice... unless that character appeared before, when Audrey visited the hopsital in earlier chapters, but I don't remember her.

Heh, so Zoey is alright, believes it was her power that caused this and her stream popularity even increased. Well, that could be worse.

Not sure what's with "Denise". Is it being a normal name all, or is there something I'm not noticing?

So, Zoey is still hostile to Tiff... but thanks to priestess talisman she will hold that hositlity back. Maybe.

Beli and Kyanna are visiting Yumi... who's kinda in a hungover-coma-paranoia... Interesting and she had it coming, though I wonder if she'll get better and what'll happen when she does.

Ok, but the thing that got me was Nikki turning away from Audrey... only to forget everything the moment Audrey referenced ponies. I wonder if you planned this all along, because I remember Audrey watching ponies with Momo. If this was planned then kudos for you and I wonder what else will come together in all this. I'm also not sure if Audrey used the ponies thing on purpose or was it accidental. Anyways, now we have a cease fire between Nikki and Audrey (friendship is magic?).

Also, not sure what's raid hour is. Is it MMO thing?

And then we get to Audrey-Tiffany scene. I don't know... I understand we have one chapter left, but this kinda feels back to the square one (kinda literally, with Tiff being healthy again). Wait, I lie, Tiffany is changed and wants to take the chance with Audrey... but Audrey is kinda in-between. She's not the Audrey we've seen in the game and for 2 stories (except for the dormitory incident), but not exactly what I envisioned her be. Don't et me wrong, I didn't expect her to stop swearing (which reminds me, she doesn't drink anymore, but what about cigarretes?).

Aaaand Kyu is the parole officer... I suppose a kind of "thank you" is in order, but if you're looking for gratitude, Kyu, then you're have the wrong tree.

Btw. is it the first point in story where all 3 girls know of faires and that other 2 know? I mean Audrey knows, Nikki knows, Tiffany knows. Tiffany and Audrey know the other knows. This scene also kinda proves Audrey and Tidanny know the other knows. But does Tiffany know Nikki knows and vice-versa (maybe I'm just not remembering the ending of Nikki's story in details)?

I wonder how faires work in details, casue Kyu (both here and in-game) seems to equate love with sex.

Anyway, it seems Audrey has the biggest beef with Kyu. Kyu helped Tiffany with her mother and made her stop being too idealistic. Kyu kinda made Nikki and Celeste possible. But for Audrey Kyu was pretty much only trouble. Not that it doesn't make sense (karma), but still... that means another unresolved point for now, becasue I doubt it's the last we'll see of Kyu here. Of course, doesn't mean Audrey doesn't deserve to be happy, but she needs to (1) want it, (2) make it happen differently.

Then we see, what's under Audrey cap. On the one hand we got used to Audrey having colored hair and with the existence of Kyu, Venus and Celeste her hair color wasn't all that weird... more importanty, Nikki had blue hair. On the other hand, I kinda expected this.

So Audrey thinks she's nothing special if she doesn't bark, doesn't wear fancy clothes and doesn't get drunk everyday. She's afraid for everyone to know she's rich and that she cares for her fish. We kinda seen some of it during Tiffany's story. Of course, she's wrong. If there's reasons I don't like Audrey, it's because of how rotten she acts and, even more, if she's actually like this. But I suppose we'll see what comes out of it.

So Audrey half-chickens half-isn't interested, hurting Tiff (kinda expected, but kinda weird too, Tiff cannot force Audrey into this, right?).

The chapter ends kinda weird. We're supposed to be past the main arc, yet there's still two love faires and the Asian schoolgirl out there. So clearly something's going to happen, but the chapter ends kinda mundane.

Anyway, glad you wrote another chapter. It wasn't too long either, maybe even easier to read than some of the earlier ones (Audrey's and Kyu's vocabularies make it harder for me to follow at times). Looking forward to the conclusions, though it's a little sad we're by the end now. I'll miss having my theories and expectations.

—Xellos540

P.S. Also congratulations on 100 reviews for this story. You deserved them all. :)

Goddamn it.. I was sure it was finally going to end on a semi positive note. It feels like an eternity since the last chapter came out.

Well, it’s most likely happening in the next and final chapter. My prediction: Momo’s spirit tells Audrey not to let Tiff go and they finally get together, “have at it,” and Audrey finally loses her Magic sight.

Hey, I was right about Audrey being at least into girls.

Oh. Oh dear.

Welp, this last chapter better end in a bang.

Both kinds hopefully.

Another fantastic chapter blew a lot of my expectations out of the water. Good job Cypher.

Nice to see you again. As surprising as it is, there's not all that much to say here.

Audrey killed the shadows, stole the bottle changed into even bigger and all-powerful queen... and when the shadows couldn't bring Momo back, she smashed the bottle.

And Tiffany woke up... did it have to do with the love fairies? Or is Audrey priestess powers include healing?

To be honest I see a lot of loose ties still to be adressed (if you want). I mean, Aiko is still there and probably pissed. We don't know what is the thing with Audrey and Tiffany right now, much alone as anyone (including Nikki and Celeste) reacts to all this.

Then there's Audrey powers (will they remain?). Audrey's family. Momo. Audrey's charges. That latina woman (Kyana?) and her friend...

So there's actually a lot to wrap up there.

And on thing... I don't know. Tiffany had flaws and problems, the experience in her story changed her and showed her a truth about herself, but I still very much liked her as a person.

Nikki was a little arrogant, sometimes misunderstood others and had problems couping with her surroundings. She wasn't all that bad too.

Audrey... I'm certainly not into swearing, smoking or her viewpoints. I know the point of the story isn't turning her into some angel, but I kinda feel Audrey still was in the wrong. Like she was too violent. Momo and Tiffany influenced her a lot, but would I say Audrey deserves to rest now? Doesn't feel like it.

Anyway, it was a good chapter and I'm looking forward to see what you have planned for Audrey next.

Kind of expected Aiko to get the shit beat out of her more, but this was still more or less what I thought would happen. Tiffany coming back at the end, I did not see coming.

Nooooo Momo come back pllzzzzzzzz. Hope to see another good one soon

Audrey's been through a lot, huh.
I hope she gets her happy ending.

Nooo! as much as I was conflicted between Momo and Tiffany when it came to Audrey's relationship, it didn't mean I'd like Momo dead. I'm assuming she was just possessing a cat's body and is alive and left looking for another host until you prove me otherwise.

Momo was incorrect though. It wasn't about the magic light. It was about the magic lightER. Make sense to have Audrey use pyrokinesis. She feels like Amateratsu from Naruto, only less black. Maybe she should use Molotova coctails too... maybe she is one.

Like usual, wondering where this will lead too, especially since not only the ending of Audrey's story is coming. It's ending of a trilogy. Where will this leave Nikki, Tiffany and Audrey?

As a side note, the title of the last chapter would be good a nice fit for this one.

P.S. Good job as usual.

P.P.S. Momo! :(