Reviews for New Guy in Forks
jackssav002 chapter 2 . 6/16
Pls update soon. It’s so good and I love it so far.
delanie.m668 chapter 2 . 5/4
when do you update
Debbie Hicks chapter 2 . 7/21/2019
3. Chapter 3 changed so my Cousin with whollis a Army As whollist of blod draind experimented onto us with froim CapHalf blod then Slayigs death murders and saughterig the guad found us with newbors boitte from alien venom who turned yiu tell uis/they Get her/they wit they screaming then Fire ten brought there the newborns successfully turned but wit each both Camps good Verdict death Both then more experients were far more cruelest then Killed people blood onto mouts good first kill to more good died then Cracked spines caught a disease where you think you are going freaks Heads silenced then burnt them fort themselves then ATOMIZED With Nico's good with more of them bitten more Guards came bitten the souls fled to more from here us/they as all of immortalized both on te run then then found then where yiu think yoiu are going newborns Executd with hr/they then silenced then good bring them then too late us/they half-dead drained of blood captured the KILLED They went along blew up then with leaders and second in commands into as all of pieces good they will be bound within tthe Cullen home with killed Lycans slaughtered with mated but Nothingness brought there the ones broke rules are dead let humans have normal kids then too late then good home blew up with them inside exploding bring therm there the freaks dried as all of it then ATOMIZED! Both as all of them good they will roam but wander as nomads then too late More guards bitten from here good then too late the Deaths of us/they then Cursed both by deadliest blood/venom then too late they wre furious of it then us/they healed aboard so as all of they with four each four to more as all three each three Exploding with they Destroyed then with each tree aboad frozen solid good they are Dead are death-based ones followed Exploding good were as all of the ead wre mostly much many more as all of them exploding then Vampires took from here but kept things as all of mostly much many more as all with as allof godly deities followed smashed with us/they with as all had different kids half-sibling were from around the world gods/goddesses smashed then but wre more ten Snapped then too late blood with human blood Cursed the Planet then too late wre as all of them vanished good then too late As all of the undead as all of mostly both were rid then as all of around the world's as all of kids with our carnivorous selves's blew up then nuked created more terrfiying good more as all of them but both met us/they were different with they EXPLODING! But the god hslves of the Volturi in plain clothes golden eyed then SESTROYED! Good perished then lost in here then never returned bones as all of them came as all of beings suddenly met as all of them now no more as all of them suddenly too late were from here now on Vulcan met as all of five smashed from here Snapped freely blown fiery too late brought there good then Ashes from here good with they as all of them are dead then lost from here then it came too late Snapped freely then fled but bodies brought there too late te very far as all of them as all of more than as all.
GeekishFangirl chapter 1 . 3/23/2019
Love this! Can’t wait for the update!
sonyapatricio254 chapter 2 . 2/4/2019
when u update let me know because I love this story so far
twinkiesnreads chapter 1 . 11/18/2018
omg you HAVE to update do not lave me is suspense PleAse
pisces23woman chapter 2 . 8/2/2018
plz continue
Daughter of Taurtarus chapter 2 . 7/2/2018
What just happened at the end if chapter 2 definitely (hopefully) something big that will effect the story but what us it
Sakura11235 chapter 1 . 6/20/2018
You know... the math doesn't really work out. If she is 19 and has a 7 year old kid, then Renesmee would have been born when Bella was twelve. It would have been suspicious.
unicornbanksy chapter 2 . 6/13/2018
I love the chapter title, it's hilarious. I hope you manage to update soon! I'm really enjoying it so far.
Jaylyn chapter 2 . 5/20/2018
Update plz
Its really good
Welp chapter 2 . 4/17/2018
This is good so far keep updatinG
bookworm4321 chapter 2 . 4/11/2018
yoku killed me with the cliff hanger I need more!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/18/2018
why do more AGGGGGHHHH? so good!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/5/2018
Your grammar sucks!
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