Ahhhhhhh love it

This is lovely. You captured all of the characters and their dynamics brilliantly. You are a phenomonal writer and I'm so glad I found your work. This might be the best literature I've read in months! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this.

Altair and Desmond. Didn't think I'd catch that reference did you?

I really enjoyed Damian’s personality and struggles. I did find Jason a little OOC but since I like PrtotectiveBro I can’t complain. I was a little confused with Damian getting shot but not hurt all (bruises, loss of breath from impact) but it wasn’t too distracting. I loved the Tim centricness cause one can never have too much Tim. ;-p. I really appreciate the lack of swearing/sex...etc prevelant in much of ff. Good job.

this makes me so happy I just cant

I love this series! I wish you would write more of this universe

Yes please do continue these as a series please

Please continue this series!

This story is fantastic! My favorite.

I love how none of the characters were one dimensional, and all had multiple layers and facets. One thing that I found very interesting is how Talia’s dream was to succeed her father with her “Beloved” and their child at her side, and how she muses about this as well as the punishments her father will submit her to as he lies *broken* and hapless at her feet. You beautifully showed in a poignant way that just like Damian, Talia’s true ambition is not world conquest, but acceptance and love. For if she truly was like her father, she would have executed him right there and then, or the many times he has laid defeated or in need of rejuvenation from the Pit.

Masterful story. I don’t know if you are interested, but could you make a story where Tim descends into villainy? I feel seeds have been sown here, and Tim would easily make for the greatest enemy of the Batfamily.

I absolutely love this series you’ve created. Both stories were fantastic. I very much hope you continue to write more in this series’ storyline, especially since it seems that Talia is up to something.

I’d also like to read about Batman’s/Bruce’s struggle to accept Tim, as well as his ultimate acceptance. A Tim and Damian bonding story would be nice, as well. Oh, and a story about Damian finally receiving the role of Robin.

Please continue to create and post!

I just read this whole story over the course of 18 hours.
I can find no faults in your grammar, and your wording is impeccable.
The one wish I have is for Tim and Steph to get back together, but I understand your issues with writing romance. It’s quite difficult for me too.
Hope to see more of your great work!

Thank you for such a well written (and Complete!) story. I enjoy your take on the Bat-fam. You've really got a grasp on the characters and have developed an AU that they can grow in. It's frustrating to me when comic writers undo any character progression in established comic lines. Having fanfiction such as yours to retreat to when DC is backsliding gives me a great amount of satisfaction.

Make another one pleaseeee

Sequel please