Reviews for Parallel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excited to delve further into this story. Keep up the good work! You have captured my attention and now I'm hooked. Happy holidays if I don't see another post before the new year. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting story idea can't wait to read your next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! I like this story! Its really funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! I'm so excited for this story! The idea of Kagome and Inuyasha meeting in the future instead of the past always seemed like it had a lot of potential. I mean, it's canon that there are still demons/spirits (though they're either invisible or dormant). I'm still kind of bummed more shard hunting didn't occur there (another thing to blame on Naraku I guess). And I 100% agree about the rosary usage. I feel like it was more used as a way to diffuse tension if Inuyasha said something rude (in the manga), but that didn't stop it from feeling like a running gag that should have been axed early on (maybe have Kagome remove it after one of the more serious battles). It felt so out of place in the epilogue chapter. Anyways, hope you have fun writing this! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() heh, I'm curious if there will be Tessaiga in this story. It starts really good, so I can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting twist to the canon. Looking forward to the next chapters. Nice work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter! Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really interesting. It's a fascinating way to alter history within their universe. I just have one question so far: Obviously the Shikon Jewel wasn't burned due to Kikyo being unable to tell Kaede to do so, but why didn't Naraku just take the Jewel from Kaede by force shortly after Kikyo died? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting for sure. I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally agree with your opinion on the kotodama/beads! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() That was a very promising first chapter:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this twist! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks very interesting. can't wait for the next chapter |