I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ

Boo that first chapter sucked

Update please

I'm pretty sure you mean canines when he smiles at her before introducing himself...incisors are the two front teeth and that wouldn't make him look like a canine that he is but it would make him look like a beaver...slightly large incisors is buckteeth. Just saying

Plz continues this story.

so very entertaining! I'm looking forward to your next update !

I enjoy reading it, but maybe make the chapters a little longer perhaps? I just about grabs you, but then it finishes.
Great job though.

Ohh i cant wait for the next chapter. It will be interesting to see Bella trying to use magic.

Omg this is so good.I like sooooo! :)) I hope you update really soon. I can't wait to see where you go from here.I beg of you please, maybe some time today. Plz, I will die.

Hahaha I liked that. Hope you continue.

omg!i love it:) plis more soonn

Wait how is Jacob a shifter NOW? Since Edward just left a few hours ago, Jake should still human for a few more months before his shifter gene wakes up. *lol*

Please update soon. I think this is cool but my only thing would be slightly lomger chapters.

this story is fascinating, I'm looking forward to your next update !

Omg this is so good.I like sooooo! :)) I hope you update really soon. I can't wait to see where you go from here.
lease update soon! :)I beg of you please, maybe some time today. Plz, I will die.