I hope there is more or a sequel? This was a beautiful and interesting story, SO funny too! I really loved your OCs and I think you portrayed all the characters very well. Thank you for keeping the angst to a tolerable level. I was very amused by the interactions between Grimmjow and Isa. You write very well and I hope to read more of your work. Thanks for all your hard work and for sharing with us readers. It is very much appreciated.

You don't seem very knowledgeable in how hollows work, just now you wrote that if she healed herself too much using her high speed regeneration(or not so high speed regeneration) then she wouldn't be able to use her resurrection... that's like, the worst think I've ever heard. Arrancar release their true forms when using the resurrection, thus becoming more powerful, stronger in every sense of the word. The resurrection doesn't cost energy to activate or maintain, it's more like you have a dam that keeps your powers sealed and the resurrection breaks it causing all your energy to flood out and empowering you.

The big problem I see right now is how she says the artificial Arrancar are stronger than her, you do realize Natural Arrancar are stronger right? The primera, Staark was a natural Arrancar. The hogyoku granted ones desires, the artificial Arrancar wanted to get stronger but also hated Soul Reapers, which is why their 'Arrancar evolution' is incomplete as a perfect Arrancar would be 50% Hollow 50% Soul Reaper.

I'm only two chapters in and already loving it. I love Isa's character and how she keeps mispronouncing Grimmjow's name. The interactions between these two feel really natural and Grimmjow is written perfectly so far. Also really like Raacharg. Looking forward to the next chapters!

This story is great! It's a pity not to be more popular. It is very engaging and the quality is excellent! Great job as always!

Soon the stories will cross, it will be interesting to see what happens in the mean time before Ria releases Isa from the rock.

This was another amazing chapter, thanks for the update!

nice

Yessssssss these two needed to get it on! Hopefully she doesn’t regret anything later cause I love these two together. I hope you do a fight scene where they work together and kick ass

*Blushing* I did not expect, but this chapter was very hot. More people should know this story, because everything is very good!

Thanks for the update! I'm excited to see what happens next :)

I'm glad that you updated! I've said it once and I'll repeat: I love this story!

good read, I'll be looking forward to the next update. congrats on buying a house my husband are trying to do the same. keep up the awesomeness and maybe I'll get some fluff or stuff in the next chapter ;)

Just read through the whole fanfic up until the most recent update. Wow! This has got me so emotionally involved. The tension between Isa and Grimmjow is killing me. Please update soon :)

Really love the change you did to the previous chapter. It didn’t set well with me that she just gave in like that cause I would’ve been like bitch kill that m*ther f*cker for not even trying to rescue you. I’m just waiting for the steamy moments cause I love the way these two interact with each other

You and these cliff hangers are savage man. You always leave it off on such a good part that just has me DYING to see what happens. Granted that's of course what you want as an author but damnit I just want to know immediately *cries in fan agony*. That being said you deserve way more reviews for this. The OC thing tends to make ppl not want to take a look but that's their loss clearly. This story is the shit. It's been so long since I read a good Bleach story like this. Also im cool with you separating this into 2 parts (not that you need my validation lol) and think it will work nicely so long as you don't KILL US by leaving it on a cliffhanger then not updating for months lol. But yeah your awesome, this stories awesome, update soon to appease your needy fans haha XD!