It's disappointing if Ombradge has the power to fire a professor, I think she would make the (muggle) avengers leave rather than trelawney.

I'm not sure what to think of this fic, it's not bad but what's the point of Harry being loki's daughter if everything goes exactly like cannon? I will continue to read but I hope that will change in the next chapters.

Go fringga..shows that bastard odin whose boss..what a prick.

What a stupid girl..her ego is bigger than whole midgard. .masochist too..i bet her brain is fill with hero complex unicorn and some shitt.

Dear Author,
I'm coming straight from Wattpad as I've found your story there by accident, posted by a different Author than you, no specified credits concerning either you or your story and it seemed to me like a plagiarism. So I googled "The Unknown Avengers Harry Potter Fanfiction", compared the chapter titles and and here we are. As I have no idea if you gave your consent towards the other Author, I decided to leave you this comment and hope you see it. Sadly, I cannot post any link or share it, as I do not seem capable enough to find it through anything not Wattpad.
So I'll just have to give you the information this way and if it is plagiarism and you decide to report it, you can find it either this way, or find me under the same user-id on Wattpad during the next 14 days (offer ending at the morning of 1. June 2020) and I will simply share the link.
See you around.

Author: BlackRose2017Z
Title: the unknown
Views: 59.7k
Votes: 1.9k
Chapters: 71
Tags: avengers, femharry, god, godess, harrypotter, hela, loki, thor
Status: Completed
Summary: I don't own this story i found it online but did not find it on wattpad
Copyright: All rights reserved

I've only read up to chapter five, but I have to say that this story so far is very well written. You've got incredible talent for writing. You certainly know how to enrapture your audience, leading the reader gently along the story, slowly but surely revealing every tantalizing hint and detail. It's exciting to read, even more so thanks to how well it's written. Barely any spelling, punctuation, and spacing errors. It's stories like this that make it completely worth it to spend hours upon hours binge reading. Awesome job!

Sincerely,
The Inglorious Fat Bastard

And I can completely see even Canon Dumbledore doing something like this

Definitely another great chapter

Awesome chapter

Definitely another really fun chapter

Another fantastic chapter

Everyone needs to be punished for their treatment of Dalia. And I mean everyone and by mean corporal punishment, in this case, harsh spanking adults and minors alike both Human Magical and Aesir. Because they have all The mistreatment of Loki and his family is what will bring about Ragnarok. I know if I was in the Great Hall I would stick everyone to their seats and remove everyones wands then I would start removing them one by one Starting with the Staff as I start beating their buts with a paddle or a

First, the good stuff. I liked the story, the structure, how in character most of the characters were, and how all of the different relationships played out.

One issue I had throughout the story was the dialogue. Most of the Asgardians sounded like American teenagers rather than the more formal language used in other media. This made it difficult to get through the dialogue heavy portions. Also, not that I didn’t understand Lily’s motivations...but what she did to James and how utterly accepting many were about the utter wrongness of it really bothers me.

A fantastic end, even if it’s a cliffhanger LOL. Excited to move on to the sequel

Fantastic and Happy Halloween