Man, Minipa After reading all of this, I came to two conclusions: one, you give very insightful advices and two, you may need to calm down cause I think you let those tropes get to you. I literally couldn't read your seventeenth chapter cause I kept thinking "Is this guy for real? He knows that we can't get avoid tropes right? He really needs to calm down". Your ranting and swearing can also sometimes make it hard to read or take it seriously. Aside from that, these are pretty good advices.

LMAO
Ty this was entertaining. You must've read a lot of cringe to be this salty over it. Very relatable though.

And I DID learn something new actually.
Never knew Kai meant Ocean in Japanese. That name IS OC overused, though ngl I love that name. Thanks to "The Snow Queen" by Hans Christian Andersen "Kai" brings up good memories for me.

Also love the irony of review below me
kys asshole
this is why naruto fandom is so toxic...

Ofc there's obligatory popularity fallacy with a comparison between a person who was mean on the Internet and someone who ordered death to millions...

Could you pm me with the link to your youtube channel? I only didn't find any 'minipa' and prev chapter mentioned panda inspirations, which i found is a ... idk a how to download x or something something gaming related.

I agree with alot of your points, I would say even more against Aegis of Fairy tail, the only reason i don't comment on his review section is mostly because I found out about it too late and i doubt he would rewrite that much. So the biggest issue i have is how much self wanking there is. Other characters are always 'Omg he's so creative!' 'so stronk!' 'a genius!' yet we never actually saw him doing that. Pretty sure i don't even remember him explaining how he bended barriers and just gave the summary of 'it takes more magic to do it'. Would help if someone complimented him like that in his face, only to lampshade it by having Elden feel guilty, because he plagarized most of his attacks from his previous world. It especially irriated me when Thunder God Tribe started gushing about how he has monsterious training regiment... Only reason i didn't drop it was because OC didn't use ass slayer magic or whatever. Nevertheless, i still follow that fic, mostly because i love reading OC fics and it doesn't cost me to just follow it. Nevertheless, rewriting it would most likely take a while and his fic is starting to branch out from fatalism, i just feel like it could have been better...

If you put a gun to my head and asked me to rewrite it to make it better, i would have oc wake up the same, just instead of barrier protecting oc, it would push both of them into a wall and crush them to death. At the start we would have loads of drama - even if they were evil wizards, murder is still a big deal, maybe even have Elden consider himself a monster (later tying in to romance with Mira, since she could help him get over his fear of murdering someone again) and vows to never use his power for murder. So he would try training the power so that he doesn't kill on accident again, and by doing so he attracts Makarov's attention (not because Makarov just happend to pass by that place...). Once he gets over it, he can start using it offensively (the push as first time doing magic would give him a clue on using it offensively). By doing this the romance with Mira would also be more symbiotic too.

Then again, maybe this sounds better in my head and im not better than the actual author.

Also to add to your point in one of the previous chapters about fanon myths - in Fate series (nasuverse) the fanfic author Gabriel's Blessing introduced stuff like Atrophied magic circuits (despite the fact that they are not physical, like muscles).

Go kill yourself asshole.

People like you is why everyone hates the toxic Naruto fandom.

You are spineless coward who insults hard working authors like Hiro Mashima behind their back and mocks their hard work.

Meanwhile you have never done anything of value in your entire life. You have clearly never worked hard a day in your life.

You have written nothing but garbage. All you have done is insult other people. You use this website as a way to insult other people and bully them.

All you have done.

You are the worst type of scumbag.

You are a worse person than Hitler himself.

Go burn in hell you piece of shit.

Quick question to the Maery Sues, do you think that a Jerk Sue would make for a good in-between OC villain?
Either to strenghten already existing canon Villains or as a Villain of an original Arc?

I'm trying to write a original arc for a fic that I'm planning to release in the future and am now creating some OC's for said arc, and I'm wondering how deep I should make the OC villains that I'm planning.

Pretty good, though it can still be improved upon.

I'm really old and I've read a LOT of advice for writers. This is the best.

Despite the rants, your advices are pretty useful and I'm going to apply them in my first story so that I won't "suck shit at writing."

Lol, I know my fic is bad, lots of holes and lots of cringes, but I won't stop or rewrite my fanfic cause I might as well finish it as a story

This is fanfiction they can write what they want

You are a total fool

This is fanfiction you dick who cares what people write they can right what they want you ass i dont care about stories as long as i can read them and stop posting this crap for every anime you tiny dick ass hole

Most insightful fanfiction author ever. If I ever actually get to writing one I’ll refer back to this.

PS- could you make a chapter on actually planing things out and improvising a new idea. The former is my kryptonite when it comes to writing.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

I hope you realize that I'm imagining an angry Scottish man yelling at me as I read your all caps...Good Job!