really well done and the idea of her being that way was a really nice touch

Love it hope you keep updating

Loved it

great chapter keep it up

It was good but confusing I would like if you do a different story with same characters but different plot.

Hot, excellently done! More!

Why does this have crime on its tags?

First of all I like how you have changed the whole twin dynamic in this fic. Rather than naruto's twin loving him for no reason other than the fact that the author wants to add it, this has a reason behind it; the character noriko loving her brother has a real meaning behind built on years of love and support from the one person she has in her life. Another great point of this fic is that they don't just jump to a physical relationship for no apparent reason there is a justifiable cause for this taboo act which makes it feel a lot more realistic that it can happen. The only issue I can find with this fic is that it is a one-shot I would really like to read more into their lives, maybe having a day in naruto's perspective? Apart from that one of the best fics in the naruto has a twin genre. I look forward to reading more of your ideas

i cant wait to see the next chapter

Damn, this is good

Great chapter, i really hope we get to see more from these twins again

I really liked it

I just noticed that you wrote this MeguMagane-san, no wonder the emotions were portrayed so well. I have been wanting to ask you about Kitsune oneesan, please tell me when are you going to update that. Thanks.

This was nice. I love this pairing. The fact that this was genuine love making was very satisfying. It has become rare to find and read genuine love making in this site anymore, all you get these days is nothing but sex with no love, not unlike a one night stand. So, I thank you for writing this emotionally beautiful piece.