Reviews for Be More Proactive This Time Around, Luckster
Princess Crystal Karma chapter 24 . 9/11
"had someone been listening to them?" OHHHH!
also the Halloween Omake was so cute!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20
Please update Naruto of chaos soon, if you need some ideas you can just ask the people that read your stories. Just please update it
CreateStuff chapter 24 . 8/20
I just found this fic today, and I’m already caught up (which should tell you what my doc reading habits are like). It’s not exactly the tone I like reading, but enjoyable anyway. Personally, my guess for the new Ultimate Despair is future!KyokoI wonder if anyone else has guessed that?
epantoja521 chapter 1 . 8/18
I'm very curious on how he'll stop Junko honesty
Unkoweeb chapter 24 . 8/12
This is a great fanfic , it has such well written, sweet, heartfelt scenes and fluff. And an intriguing and building plot, and great use of tension. The characters are all interesting and their interactions are always fun and endearing! Hope this fic gets updated soon , will definitely be waiting!
Ara chapter 24 . 8/6
Hey! I just wanted to say hi! I've been casually reading this fic since it began and I have to say I love it. I also happen to be Venezuelan and still live here, so I understand literally everything you're talking about.

Please stay safe during the pandemic! I know this feels like hell, but we'll get through this.

Lots of love,
Ara
Guest chapter 14 . 7/27
this is a great fic...they nailed the characters, and the situations makoto gets himself into with the other ultimates are nothing less than hilarious! currently putting this review after reading the monaca chapter, which had me feeling really bad for her...so good on you author! i know with a cast of 50 characters and college it must be hard to juggle everything, but you do it so well...i hope to see more
Killusion chapter 14 . 7/10
The scenes with Naegi and Hajime are hilarious.
Brojo'sStrangeJourney chapter 23 . 7/6
it took a reread to figure out Asahina was practicing giving back Naegi's hoodie and that's what Chisa misunderstood lol I'm dumn
Brojo'sStrangeJourney chapter 24 . 6/29
i quite like this story so far. I hope you're doing better and continue soon. I think you're great at capturing everyone's personalities.
SchoolSukks chapter 24 . 6/28
I have been reading your Fanfic for quite a while, and I have to say that is one of the best Fanfics I ever read! It's nice to see our boi Makoto Naegi getting love! I'm so excited to see what's going to happen in the next chapter! Stay safe and have a nice day!
Guest chapter 23 . 6/20
Why is this rated m if their is no smut
Somethingthing chapter 24 . 6/19
Just wanted to say that I’ve really been enjoying this fic! I mean, I don’t doubt they’re ooc to some degree, but still really liking it so far. I also like how despair is coming in kind of like the shark from Jaws or something. Circling ever closer... And I’m liking how they interact with one another. That’s pretty much it. Hope you have a nice... Life, probably. (I don’t review very often).
Funny-Little-Cute White Fox chapter 24 . 6/16
Hope you write soon!
potatosauce chapter 13 . 5/19
is it tengan? is kyousuke pretending to be a despair?
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