Reviews for The Entity
Starla Marie Locke chapter 10 . 4/4/2018
Heartbreaking but beautiful!
Guest chapter 10 . 11/20/2017
Sad the happy ending wasn't possible but happy for this
Guest chapter 10 . 11/20/2017
My name is Dame and I wanted to tell you that I really love this fic. I think you capture the connection between mileven perfectly. I was a little worried when Mike died but I had faith that you would bring them together or make a follow up for it which by the way you should think of doing with Nate. I really enjoyed this and wanted to say great job and keep writing you have a true gift for it
idonthaveashipihaveanarmada chapter 10 . 11/20/2017
oops lol supposed to be for chapter 10
idonthaveashipihaveanarmada chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
I mean I'm still gonna be mad at you forever but thanks for giving us a halfway happy ending (did you get my season two reference there ahahahahahaha) also this was a great story even if I was screaming and throwing my phone across the room half the time
phieillydinyia chapter 10 . 11/20/2017
NO
NOOOOO
I AM ONLY LIKE ONE-QUARTER HAPPY!
WTF IS THIS?
NO!
HE STILL DIED!
AGHHHH WHYYYYYYYYY
Okay the ending was pretty sweet
BUT I DONT GIVE A DAMN IF ORDER WAS COMPLETELY SHAPE-SHIFTED, MIKE SHOULD HAVE STAYED ALIVE!
CDsis chapter 10 . 11/20/2017
It's hard to make me cry, but you managed it! Great job 3
Guest chapter 9 . 11/19/2017
Noo what have you done! Mike
Guest chapter 9 . 11/19/2017
Lovin the story so far
idonthaveashipihaveanarmada chapter 9 . 11/19/2017
if you don't fix this in the last chapter I'm suing
phieillydinyia chapter 9 . 11/19/2017
UMMMM
what?
Is this your idea of a "bittersweet" ending or did U just think..., "nah screw it, I'm gonna make everyone cry"
Guest chapter 9 . 11/19/2017
It’s good O kill off characters
phieillydinyia chapter 8 . 11/19/2017
BANDVWISHSVWNDBVFGNVOJW WMALDOGNTNFBEIEBDNFORNROEBWNDIBFNSUWIEBRBDIFJWIWBDNDISUWBTNCKCLSIEBRBFJCIFBGBTNFKDIEHEBSHDHDJGGHHHHGGFBFJGJDJDJSBEBEVSHSJXJHDJDUEHBNDNEHFHRHEHRUDGGENEJR
Guest chapter 8 . 11/19/2017
You can kill Mike I don't know leave the door open but don't kill Mike
MeetMeAtTheQuarry chapter 8 . 11/18/2017
WHAT THE FRICK DUDE, MIKE BETTER NOT DIE
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