Love the story!

such an amazing story i know i will be reading it again. Ray was ridiculous bring Elena to the hospital listening to her lies bring Hyde into Ana's life then Leila was a lunatic , Kate the worst friend ever and Ana's child neglecting, money hunger mom form hell. i love every minute of reading it.

Ana is a little horny toad .

are you fucking kidding me Ana slept with Elliot please tell this isn't true

No puede ser. Elliott mole hagas eso a Grey tu hermano.

Love this story. It's different, but with the details of the Canon. Thanks for share it!

whewww great way to shook us

what the fudge ray

I would really like a sequel

Just finished this story after finding it a couple days ago. Thank you for sharing it with us. :)

Great story.
My only concern is your characters are well-bred, educated, privileged white people.
In the real world, their language is culturally correct, slang is not allowed.
In your stories, the privilege white Grey family speech patterns is uneducated. When reading your stories,
I constantly assume you are a Black Male writer.
When writing, please do your research.

Thank you for wrapping it up in a nice tight bow ! I loved your story and i will look for more from you ..

Thank you such a great story ! I tugs at my heart strings and then Pow its all better good story !

I must be slicing up four of five onions with all the crying i am doing ... Good story

Congratulations on writing such a wonderful storyyou are very talented and I enjoyed this very much!