I don't know why but this is BEAUTIFUL!

Just...WOW! You have me so curious to what happens next, but the open ending is also perfect for the possibilities.

I'll give you the hundredth review because this story is awesome. I've never read a fic like this before and I definitely love it. Great work you did with Draco, because he stayed the same as we know him, but still changed just enough for this to work.
-Emma

This is amazing! I read it over a few times extra just to make sure I didn't miss anything other amazing thing that could pop up. You managed to convey so much emotion in such a small amount of words.

I'll be looking forward to reading other works of yours.

That was utterly heartbreaking. Lovely read.

I really liked this one-shot! The way you've written it was... there's really no other word for it for me but seductive. Not completely in a sexual way, but the kind of seductive that draws you in to the dark or where the hell ever. Hahaha.

I also get the feeling that although the Tom Riddle here is a horcrux, and is therefore really dark, that he cares about Draco even just a little bit.

Although I badly want to ask for a sequel for this, I think that in a way this is also a good place to stop.

Interesting, its a bit sad but quite creative.

Hey
great written. Fantastic!
Poor Draco, his 'playmate' is dead -.-

I wrote him on my sixteenth birthday and cried. It wasn't my tears falling on the pages that did it. I'd cried on the diary too many times to count. I'd written in it everyday, my writing spiralling around the hole in the center of the book. But these tears, tears of my sixteenth birthday woke him up. The ink of a thousand entries over three years rose to the surface. "Are you sixteen, Draco?"
I really love this scene. This is the punchline, and a end, which everyone can think more.
Ouh, I love this pairing too (:
they are hottest Slytherins 3
bad but hot. But, the badest are the hottest, aren't they?

He gave me my first kiss then, a tender brush of lips - a collision of the tangible and transparent. He promised me that we'd see each other again, and when we did meet again, he'd be real. "I'll give you a real kiss then, a solid kiss," he told me determinedly, touching my face with hands that didn't feel. "I'll come back and I'll grow up with you and kiss you and you'll be mine forever."
Sadly, this kiss wasn't real. Poor Dray, he love Tom, and he couldn't feel this kiss. Sadly!
But, Tom will came, is back again. Hope they will have action in their bed XD

Greets,
great written,
good idea

Mrs MalfoyRiddle

Awwww so sad it made me cry

I love this story so much

Please please please can you continue it

I totally ship this pairing and my fondest wish is for there to be more delicious draco/tom fics.

This one was simply stunning and just genius in the end. Thank you! :D

wow. i'm normally a silent reader but i needed to leave a review for this because it was just so unique, strange and well-written.

I loved the last three lines the best.

Great work.

wow, that was beautiful. i love how the ending leaves so much to the imagination.

he had a relation ship with voldi? thats creepy but okk

This story is absolutely beautiful. I love how you portrayed Draco and Tom's characters and how Tom differentiated himself from Voldemort.

Will there be more? :D

awww...how sad...