This also needs a few more chapters or thirty. ;)

Beautifully written! Thanks so much

Thank you for this.
Very thought provoking.

Canon Harry was a world class moron, in 2nd year he saw what Oblivate did to Lockhart. Don't want to kill then Oblivate the fuck out of them, hell he should of used the Rita interview to expose Umbridge and her blood quiel. The HP is great source material but JKR destroyed her own work, with things like Horrorcrux that Harry can hear but he never heard them before it was needed to the big happy Weasly family where the hero ends up with a Fan Girl instead of the who has always been there for him. HP should of ended that night in the Graveyard. Dumbledore was nothing more than a child abuser who used grooming techniques to turn Harry into a weapon and martyr all because he thought so much of himself that no one could know something or prevent something he couldn't, hell him letting Snape run around unchained made the 2nd war so much harder to fight with him stopping a LOT of people getting proper potion training to not putting a stop to all the crap his junior DE's pulled, to not taking out the DE who escaped prison cause of bribes. Dumbledore and Snape knew Voldermort wasn't fully dead but did NOTHING to remove his minions and soldiers before the 2nd war started.

Dumbledore was the anti-hero of the story and Snape was his loyal 2nd, they had Harry brainwashed so bad to think killing enemy soldiers in war is bad when you can capture them and they either get sent to a prison where they leader can easily free them again or they bride their way out. He should of learned a dead DE is one who can't go on to kill rape torture anymore.

Great job I liked the story

Just imagine all the shit that'd come down if Harry had left that night? He takes Dobby as his House Elf, has him collect any and everything of the Potters and related families, goes to the Hufflepuff dorm to speak with Susan Bone and through her, her aunt at the DMLE or her home, gives a pensive memory of the abuse by Umbitch and his supposed family before leaving England for another country and school. Once there he gives up his British Citizenship for that country's. Thus rendering Fumblewhore powerless to force him to return. Should Fumbles be so stupid as to kidnap Harry back to Briton he causes an international Incident and one hell of a political shit storm! Things would get even worse if Harry gave an interview to the world press and showed them his hand. Being sure to tell them that the Minister himself oked the use of a blood quill on any and all students who didn't follow the Ministry line. Then just to make sure Fumbles get's his fair share of the shit coming down tell them that he and his staff did nothing to protect the students from Umbridge. To really hurt Fumbles include how the old goat molester sealed his parents Will, placed him in an abusive home and forced him to return there every summer, forbid his friends to write him the summer after the Tri-Wizards, how ALL books relating to said tournament disappeared from the Hogwarts library till the day AFTER the names came out of the giblet, how the other three champions had help from their professors yet none in Hogwarts would help him save a disguised Death Eater. A Death Eater who was Polyjuiced to pass as a longtime friend of Fumblewhore's. Yet for such a longtime friend Fumbles never noticed anything wrong during an entire year. How Fumbles was the one who put the Fidelius Charm on his parents house but claimed not to know who the Secret Keeper was. Then go on to tell them in detail about every year spent in Hogwash. Really throw the old fraud under the bus.

nice work

Come on Harry! Lay the smack down on everyone, Umbridge starting. Then the rest of the school for been a bunch of a-holes.

A nice departure from the usual smut stories.
Don't get me wrong, I like the smut stories, but sometimes I think the Harry/Kara relationship suffers due to an excess of smut.
However, that is not the case with this one. Harry is doubting himself and Kara encourages him. I hope to see more of this in your future stories.

Yet another Harry/Kara fic...though this one is very heartwarming. :)

Great job.
Draco122

I would just bail aND let them kill themselves

Amazing!

Awesome!~

That was neat