| Reviews for the Vampire of Hogwarts |
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  OX-11 chapter 12 . 4/13 Too many spelling errors and many of the centances are missing words. You need a beta reader. This story need a lot of work. |
| Mass chapter 1 . 12/25/2019 Good premise but please edit carefully.. Read through this carefully one sentence at a time.. Doing so will make it easier to catch errors.. It will also make it easier to spot areas that are out of place or don’t make sense.. example.. You said.. “It did not meant for neglected Harry and for you to treat him like trash” Should be.. “It didn’t mean you could neglect, and treat Harry like trash” Write drafts, print them, read them, circle errors, ask your self does this make sense, will my readers understand it.. Fix it then print it again check and correct it again.. Have someone else besides you read it.. etc... This will help you become a better writer, and produce better content.. You got this just slow down and take a bit more time with your writing.. |
| Vlad chapter 2 . 10/30/2019 The idea itself is very interesting, however, this specific fanfic is written very poorly as poorly as Harry was treated by the Dursley’s. |
 Super Sonic Wind chapter 12 . 7/22/2019 Well I wish Him or Her luck while this this story is entertaining it's full of mistakes like sentences not playing out the way they should but hopefully AstroNeko3000 can fix it or have a beta reader spell check every chapter. I can't volunteer because I've never made any stories only read them. |
| Angel 0f GRIMM chapter 2 . 7/11/2019 ok you've ruined this story by placing a dress on Harry |
| wolfzie13 chapter 1 . 5/31/2019 3 |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/14/2019 Is English your first language? |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/10/2019 Uh huh. This is not a flame! However, you are writing like a 12 year old spaced out on sugar and cannabis. Your grammar and syntax suck big time and your spelling is below consideration! Please, please, please find a creative writing class and a grammar correction software! |
| AstroNeko3000 chapter 11 . 2/18/2019 why not just rewrite it? I'm sure you will get inspiration back that way |
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/11/2019 You NEED a beta reader! |
| mizzrazz72 chapter 11 . 2/11/2019 Harry shouldn't have to deal with this harassment. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/11/2019 Is this a joke? |
| TechnoGalen chapter 1 . 2/26/2018 Know the language before writing in it, idiot. Can barely understand even one of sentence of this thing. |
| AstroNeko3000 chapter 9 . 2/22/2018 do like snakes on a plane? lol love the line you used |
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/21/2018 A very funny update, please update Again soon. |
