Reviews for Wielder of the Omnitrix |
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![]() ![]() ![]() when will you post more? |
![]() ![]() Your story is great so far. I see that you're going for a 'good Sasuke' here, which is refreshening from all the needless and plentiful bash fics. I don't really see Sasuke as Naruto's rival with the Omnitrix so you should probably give him the Antitrix. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story and I for one love how your introducing the omnitrix to the world, well I cant wait for more so ill see you next time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() naruto ben/gwen (cunning as ben and clever as Gwen) sasuke gwen or kevin (apparently loyal and intelligent as Gwen, more like what happens to his character in the canon I classify him as a possible Kevin (ben 10 classic and then alien force)) depending on how the story follows |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story so far hope to see another chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should update this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am looking forward to chapter 3 and I hope Naruto unlocks Vilgaxian alien form. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its not bad, but a bit odd in some parts with the wording |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() looking good bud! keep up the good work! lots of cookies from me! |
![]() ![]() Interesting story continue it as soon as possible please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really liking the take off this crossover. Keep up the good work. |