Reviews for Battle of Wills (DISCONTINUED) |
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Guest chapter 4 . 6/17/2018 technically peter is mutated |
cassari chapter 4 . 4/12/2018 I meant that for chapter 4 |
cassari chapter 1 . 4/12/2018 Everything’s so spot on. You’re really capturing the characters, which I absolutely love. I look forward to the next chapter since I really want to see how the older Avengers interact with Peter. |
minkspit chapter 4 . 1/31/2018 I love this so far. Everyone is in-character, the writing is clean, there's endless potential, and we've only hit the tip of the iceberg so far. I love Peter and Ned's reactions to everything. They're both young points of reference in a ridiculous situation that anyone would gawk at, which we all need. Take all the time you need to update. Nonetheless, I look forward to the next chapter. |
Nettle29 chapter 3 . 12/2/2017 a new great chapter! i can't wait for everybody's reaction to thor telling them: SPIOLER! so yeah I basically blew up my home planet to kill my evil sister |
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 3 . 12/2/2017 Great chapter, this is great. |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/21/2017 So yeah, that was a bit less dramatic than I thought but well sometimes we don't get what we expect. I really liked Thor and Peter hanging out. I also really liked that Peter hung upside down outside the door. I actually loved that part. Most people forget to include Peter using his abilities just for fun or for relaxation, so that was really great. Thank you. I am looking forward to your next chapter. |
Collie chapter 1 . 11/20/2017 Peter you rock ! Great chapter. I am really hoping for Dad!Tony and Peter against Steve here. I am looking forward to your next chapter. |
crazyaboutto chapter 1 . 11/20/2017 I was going to write this sooner but I forgot. I'm sure Peter knows all Avengers name. Everything was public. Even Scott knew Wanda in CACW. And also in Homecoming, if you look at Peter's texts to Happy you will see "How's Black Widow?" and "or should I call Natasha?" He clearly knows who Natasha is. And he is a big fan. He would have learned all Avengers name even before CACW Other than that it's going good. Looking forward to next chapter |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2017 That was a really good start. It seems like Tony is starting to become a bit overprotective of Peter. I really liked that Peter just got up and walked out on them. Keep up the story :) |
grishma239 chapter 1 . 11/19/2017 loved it.. I hope you are going to update very fast like in tomorrow.. |
EmotionallyConstipatedOops chapter 1 . 11/18/2017 Love it! Can't wait for next chapter! |