I just reread everything you have written for what feels like the hundredth time. I'm excited to continue it whenever you get back to it. Keep it up!

I hadn't read this chapter before my last review but Jon is still acting like a petulant child. The next few lines prove my point

Just leave me alone,' Jon grumbled as he avoided any eye-contact by staring at his knees.

'You can't stay down 'ere,' Davos stated in a business-like tone. 'You'll freeze if you do.'

'So?' Jon replied not looking at the older man.

'So?' Sansa replied sounding rather angry. Jon couldn't see her glare but he knew it was there.

It sounds like Davos and Sansa are parents scolding a whiny little brat.

I like the story but there are times whenJon acts like a child. Tickling Sam, Running away when he finds out his true identity, Screaming at a Statue etc

You could have wrote Jon leaving the room in a quick pace and looking for solace to process, like a mature adult. Instead he runs away like a child whos just been told there grounded. Except he's not a child and it makes him seem kind of pathetic

Screaming at the Statue I could maybe understand but taken into context with the running away it just feels like child having a tantrum in their room after being grounded

The tickle scene just need to be removed its fucking weird to read about two grown men tickling each other

Its a good story but these things just stand out as strange and out of character

Jon tickling Sam was really weird for two grown men to do

Nice story please update ll

Poor Jon

I hate Sansa. I hope Jon doesn't push Dany away.

I love you story I hope that you update date soon

Arya you want Jon as your brother even knowing that he is your cousin, so protect Jon you know your sister Sansa is ambitious although she claims to hate Cersei in some ways imitates her; You're not going to let her try to steal his right to rule Jon. You still have the evidence that she was the one who betrayed your father to Cersei, which caused him to be locked up, bringing him and all his servants to death. You are able to use this information in order to protect Jon, Davos you must be careful that the intrigues do not hurt Jon, you are going to advise him to take the throne because he would be a wonderful king; Varys this information changes everything Aegon is the rightful king of the 7 kingdoms just imagine the king who might astonish you. Varys you must ensure that this information has to be known to the nobles of the North, only then can he use your spies to send this information to all the kingdoms because there are several nobles who were loyal to Prince Rhaegar and will want to see his son as the king of the 7 kingdoms.

La ultina temporada se pasó por lo huevos las profecías, historias entrelazadas, y al tal azor ahai quien se supone debía traer el amanecer... la temporada 8 fue el declive de esta serie.. Jon, daenerys, tormund son de mis personajes preferidos, espero que tengan un final bueno y si no es así el mejor de los finales Jon matando al rey de la noche y muriendo éticamente en caso de que no haya un final feliz para jon y daenerys. En lo personal eso me gustaría. Son de los personajes que no tenían nada y fueron progresando poco a poco y a lo último uno muere y otro en el exilio sin nada, tanto para morir solo sabiendo que mató al amor de su vida triste en verdad
T.T T.T T.T esperando con ansías el siguiente capítulo, que te mejores.. saludos

Ahhhhh no mamches que capituloooo, va a correr sangre.. aquí dándote ánimos, gran historia. Seguí.os esperando auu auuu auuuu

Me gusta como y la dirección de la historia. Como a ti no me gustó como termino GOT, que TU historia va a ir por diferentes puntos esos es lo interesante. Va haber personas que no le va a gustar es más fácil criticar, pero tu sigue. Un fan tuyo

Ohhhh me encato ti historia, soy un fiel seguidor del norte, Jon y tormund... jajajaja el descaro de tormund cada vez que lo Leo me da una tremenda risa, sigue con tu historia, una perspectiva diferente de lo que pudo haber sido..

Hello, I am very sorry about your illness, but you must be strong and do your part to move on, thanks for the chapter, it was great.
the only thing that I did not like was sansa and her thoughts of being the ruler of the north I hope that the news of Jon's parents nor have consequences with the lords of the north a greeting and I hope and upload the next chapter soon

Then why did Rhaegal nod when Jon inquired if it was his mother earlier?