There's absolutely nothing wrong with having a sexy dress such as that in an adorably sweet and fluffy little piece as this. 'w' The beginning almost makes it feel as though we're the ones walking along undressing her with our eyes. But all in all we're here for these two and their beautifully perfect relationship~

You both did wonderfully, though, and it's always nice to see you two work together :) Thank you for a lovely little fic!

Ah, yes Hitomi and Lei-Fang, DOA 'premiere' lesbian couple. The couple that almost everyone ships since there appearance and interactions in the DOA Xtreme Beach Volleyball trailer. And why wouldn't they. These two are absolutely adorable together, as you two have fully well captured in this fic. Not only that, you made look extremely sexy as well. LeiLei and 'Tomi look quite scrumptuous in their respective outfits. And if how they behave with other isn't the stuff of true romance, than I don't know what is.

Loved how Hitomi expressed her small bout of jealously once she and LeiLei make it back to the Chinese beauty's living quarters. It's just enough to show how much she cares about her lady without being too clingy and driving her away. And LeiLei responds in kind, accepting her girl's woe with understanding, love, and grace as a lady should. Of course now that they are inside, they can express their naughty sides, but in this case that is best left to our imaginations.

Overall a wonderful, perfectly mellow, fluffy romance featuring two of DOA finest. Now if only BOTH of them were included in DOA Xtreme 3. Anyway, excellent work to both Major Mike and Yuri-chan. I eagerly await your next venture together.

Until then, DA SAGA CONTINUES!

Peace out

Ahhh Mike... you just love putting LeiFang in that lovely black dress, don't you? Well, I don't blame ya. It really is such an exquisite, elegant, sexy piece of clothing *_*

This was quite an adorable little oneshot between the Dynamic Duo of cuteness, Hitomi-chan and LeiLei-chan. They really are such a perfect duo, and that makes them perfect lovers as well.

And of course, behind those cute innocent expressions hide a naughty, mischievous side... which Hitomi so prominently displayed when she got LeiFang on her bed. Sometimes, it's just nice to be reminded that nobody else is worthy of you but the one you've given your heart to :3

That was an excellent fic. Good job, by both of you!