... Would ya believe me if I told you the greatest disappointment in this chapter was the distinct lack of Either Sun or Neptune getting blasted in the chest with beanbag rounds? Because I was waiting the entire time for one of those two to pop in the window, and watch Six have a repeat incident from Ruby's unfortunate encounter of ye olde sawn-off. The idea of One of em getting blasted back OUT of the window amuses me greatly. ... anywho, binged this story over the course of two, two and a half days... and I gotta say, damn good work mate. Looking forward to more in the future.

Kind of confused how you keep creating conflict (trash talking at dinner, what six sees as using lethal weapons in a spar) and then the problem disappears within 2 paragraphs. It seems as if your character is in a box unable to change the story in a meaningful way.

Hopefully you see this as criticism rather than hate, I have enjoyed reading so far. I enjoy your take on this and the distinctive voice you've given your character. But it's frustrating to read about a character who seemingly isn't any part of cause and effect.

Reading how you write six's thoughts 'like this', it makes sense in certain situations such as in the lecture scenes you've written. But you also write his thoughts into paragraphs as its written from his perspective. It makes me think you write them first as actual speech then change it to 'thought speech', because of how the other characters would react in a way that throws the story away from canon.

I mean it's your choice and your story, but I believe it would be a greater story to read of you chose natural reactions over sticking to the original plotline. Maybe the story idea started from a scene in canon you thought the Courier would be awesome in, and you're sticking to the plotline until that moment? Either way I enjoyed it to this point but can't continue with it.

Enjoy writing!

NAVY HALE!
RIPPING BERINGELS APART WITH HIS BARE! HANDS!

Love the new chapter

Good chapter and so the real war between the good fighters and political raiders begins just hope that six is a sneering imperialist when it counts. Just remember war never changes.

Damn I love that gruff bastard mingling with them...

Ironwood isn't taking him seriously but if if he tries to pull some shit down the road in Volume 7 or even earlier he's going to die plain and simple along with any soldier or specialist who gets in the Courier's way.

praise be to the omnissiah, happy this hasnt died

because of course ozpin and co aren't going to use that tech wisely! it should be cool to see what happens when six's loyalty to his friends comes into conflict with their loyalty to their leaders

So with Six about to go on a warpath it will be fascinating to see how a person with actual military expertise will effect the mission. That whole, "this is all the side missions I did" bit was hilarious, at that point they'd probably be wondering why he isn't teaching courses like survival and first aid. Certainly more useful than some windbag, coffee addict (can't blame him), and the Magnificently Enlarged Lady Friend (MELF courtesy of Fallout fancomic Deathclaw Desu Ga by Drunkfu). So which weapons and technologies did Atlas keep? I'm sure a certain Stealthsuit is currently giving sass to Pietro, who is probably looking over a small armory of laser guns, stealth boys, power armors, and the K9000 (Penny wanted a dog anyway). Excellent chapter, looking forward for this next talk.

Very much enjoying this story but one thing that keeps bugging me is courier sixs strength, I'm not here to complain or argue his power level relative to Rwby, more to get a clearer understanding because akt of choices seem rather strange. You've mentioned in your review response that's without Aura six would understandably be underpowered to the others, however when discussing the lack of implants you say it's because it's make him overpowered. If they would both lead to the same purpose of making six on an equal playing field(relatively) why go with the typical rwby cliche of the main character magically getting aura? Because six is supposedly max level and you're reason is that enemies never stop getting stronger which is... Weird. From a game perspective then yes the enemies cap out at your level, hence level scaling, if enemies in fallout kept getting exponentially stronger but you maxed at 45, it'd just be bullshit. In real-life level caps don't exist... So there's nothing stopping from a person constantly improving yourself. It just seems that the reasons for sixs current pwlr state never atcually have

I love this fic a lot. I just can't help but sorry that there is a power creep coming six's way. While he's basically a suped up SEAL operator he's fighting literal tanks every time he gets into a fight I mean I'm sure he'll still eat up and spit out anything that comes his way as always has but without half his arsenal at hand I imagine that the damage he takes won't be without a grave price even with a cheap aura.

Does Navy Hale eat Beowolves for breakfast?

You can’t escape the plague! Anyway glad to see recent events didn’t halt the story. Can’t wait for the next chapter, I’m curious to see what Atlas will do with the transportalponder.

Watching Ironfuck and Ozpin beings fucking idiota Is the equivalent of watching a harem anime and screaming yo the MC to pic a girls, you just know the More Time It passes the greater the screw up Is going to be and with Ozpin arrogance mixed with Ironwood stupidity its just bound to a huge disaster. With that out of the way great chapter