this was SO fun to read! i look forward to reading more, esp her interactions with ranma (is she still gonna uncute if dojikko-ken basically requires cuteness? how will their initial meeting go, will akane still challenge ranma-chan to a fight? what will ranma think of his xtra clumsy fiance?), shampoo (imagine akane "accidentally" defeating her), and ukyo (cute fiance vs uncute fiance). if mariko and azusa showed up earlier, will the same happen w/ kodachi since akane is a magnet for "weird shit"? overall, this was SUPER fun to read. fast, snappy, and hilarious. i cant wait to read (and reread) more!

Cool. Good. Maybe awesome

... Things have deteriorated faster than it has in canon... What have you done?!

Loving this so much!

A very fun story to read so far, hope to read more of it.

I love ve this I wonder what Ranma thinks when he get to know her?
Also this art have problems with really powerful martial artists like the ones follow Ranma around... I think Akane will need more types of martial arts to include in her new one in order to fight someone like Xian Pu or Ryoga and finally people like Herb...

I hope Ranma help her with aerials I think she could include some of that in her art, also she needs to fight Kodachi that will gave more in the form of weapons and how to make cloth into a sharp or blunt object. She need to master Ki enhancement into objects and herself.

Lovely or wonderful

This was hilarious! I loved it! Expecially your narrating every thing, it really brings the whimsical ness of Rumiko’s stuff to life. I just hope you’re not going to regress this ‘cute’ Akane into the fandoms favorite (and wrong) portrayal of a mallet happy, penis envying shrew. Thanks for your hard work in writing this, you’ve made my day!

I love this story.
And the switch personality of mariko is a cool idea.

Whelp. I... I'm looking forward to her interactions with Ranma, and their first match. Is it wrong of me to want to see widescale destruction from Ranma also picking up on the style as he/she's often capable of doing?

Cool. Awesome.

Usagi, you left a legacy of death.

Heh, this is going to be a ton of fun, hope it takes a while before Ranma shows and we get more focus on Akane and her 'wired shit'

Though speaking of Ranma he is going to go crazy trying to learn this "art" once he sees it.

Good. Cool. Cute

Was this the Akane we needed?

It's definitely not the Akane we deserve at least, we being the utter failures of humanity we are!