i really really love this story and all the hidden references like lines from the movie and the troll curse thing and just everything about it i love so much, amazing work!

I think this is the happiest Helsa fic I've ever read and Omg thank you for writing it!

Despite it bieng the almost exact same plot as the movie, your writeing and the creative soulmark idea compelled me to reach the end. And let me say I was not disapointed and in fact quite enjoyed the whole story. Thier are a few things I think could have been better, like Elsa waking up in her ice palace had a strange flow and perhaps a bit more of the words from the movie bieng changed to showcase the soulmate plot. However that first point is easily forgotten compared to the rest off the story and the second issue I can also happily give you some praise for. Because it became a fun trying to guess if you could pull off the original dialog within the context of the story, and though some more original dialog would have been nice...You suprisingly made it work do to going into the charecters thoughts. Overall thank you for a splendid read.

I am now 21 and yet I will never, ever get enough of happy endings! That was great and very cute.

This whole story is just beautiful. You've done a wonderful job of capturing the characters and writing a 'Happily Ever After' 3

My heart just broke to not find Prohibition in curls.

I loved this story! You are a fantastic writer and did such a wonderful job writing as each character. Hans is my absolute favorite character from Frozen and it was really refreshing to read a redemption story for him (although I do adore him as the antagonist, too! He's such a good bad guy!) I was impressed with the idea that Marshmallow is Olaf's brother - I'd never thought of them that way, but it does strangely make sense. Thanks again! Here's hoping Hans appears in the Frozen movie sequel!

Awwww...

Dear Banana-Rama,

I have recently noticed a moron called NamelessShit plaguing your works with negative comments. The person is really sick in my opinion and has never taken a look at her own work. I prefer your "out of character Elsa" million times than her characterless incestuous Elsa.

Therefore, it's my humble request to you to not pay any attention to the words of this cretin. You are the best! Its because of writers like you that I am proud to call myself a Helsa Fan. In fact I would love it if you block this scumbag but its all your decision. Love you!

Such a delightful read! The entire idea of a soul mark and weaving into the original Frozen plot was so masterful, as if it was always there and I just never knew it! This is how I wished so badly Frozen really ended. And thank you so much for giving a plausible and realistic romance as the conclusion rather than poof-we-live-happily-ever-after!

aaw, its so cute the ending! :o

Love it!

Is this really the end? T_T

Still, love every minute of it... I wonder how is he with the snowguies... Im sorry to see this go, but happy that theyre together.

Very fun read. Satisfying ending.

Hans is excellent in his role of guiding Elsa to become better in politics, manipulating the people with his silver-tongued presentation of her and taking care of the affairs with Weselton. Elsa fears of what her people would think were realistic. I like that the soulmark was used to explain Anna and Kristoff's relationship but was hidden in the case of Elsa and Hans. Her gratitude to the hero Hans was the start for a long time period, until the conditions were perfect for a public announcement of their engagement; it was nice to see a "real-life" approach and not a magical happily ever after. Hans thought to tell her to restrain her creativity regarding living snow creatures was funny.
It was a perfect ending for a brilliant story. Thank you for your amazing work!

I'm sad this is over, but the ending was really cute.