There’s so much happening in this thrilling story but at its core it’s romantic. We deserved this kind of thing on the show. The writers should be shamed. You should be proud haha.

Reading this for maybe the dozenth time. Still love it. I was never a Morcia shipper, so this version of their friendship is exactly what I thought it was. Mutual, platonic, crazy, best of the best friends love. I really enjoy Derek in this. Every time I read your stuff I get something else out of it that I may have missed before. I know you said that after Summer (which is my ultimate fave story of yours (so much fluffy flirting!)) you said you were done but please don't ever take these down!

Love it

This one too. Still wonderful in the second/third/fourth read. And I’m already excited at the smut I know is coming. Have to urge myself not to skip ahead, but that’s not hard when the story is this enjoyable. I really miss your writing!

Brilliant!

This is so cute. I love Luke being just so over her pretending. I love the team being so shocked and pleased. This is funny. The humor is on point.

So far.., great job! Well written and it’s staying in focus! Way to go. You should try a JJ /Reid story! Your writing style would completely nail it! Again... great job!

This was utterly perfect. This is absolutely beautiful and still funny and believable. I didn't know how this could end and not make me sad that it was over but I find myself so satisfied with the outcome. Thank you so much!

Yes! Love the sweetness. Love that Luke knew it was her. Also, love the slight embarrassment from the team. Very funny

Love the detail. Penelope is determined!

Really enjoyed Derek and Luke walking each other through the complicated mind that is Penelope. Girl, just do him. I would. LOL

Luke aggressively demanding for her to let him take care of her is my new kink. Damn.

Hot damn. I can feel Penelope's pain. And I also understand Luke's odd sense of calm. The case even pulls me in. This is great. CM writers, please pay attention!

Hot sexy times. And, the suspense here is amazing.

Why oh why are they so cute! Again, now that this is my second go round, and I’m not trying to figure it out as I go, all the little details are so much more clear. (Though, I will pat myself on the back because I figured out who was involved when you mentioned them in a later chapter. Leaving this here instead of there so as not to spoil for new readers.) I love best friend Derek. I know a lot of people ship thembut, to me, their platonic intimacy is what makes them, them. He’s figuring out his baby girl!