Reviews for Under the Light of the Shattered Moon
Pyeknu chapter 13 . 10/13/2019
I really, really, REALLY hope you come back to this one of these days, Q-man! This sort of snarky Harry is ALWAYS enjoyable...and unleashing him on Remnant of all planets?

Sweet...!
WhiteElfElder chapter 13 . 12/20/2018
With the Mages be putting up protections around Beacon; wards, runic shields, ice-cream/blonde hair vanishing spells to put Neo and Yang in uber-killing mode, red capes and flags to distract Adam?
StrongGuy159 chapter 13 . 12/13/2018
Awesome story continue please.
DalkonCledwin chapter 3 . 10/24/2018
I don’t think you want to say Weiss is bemused. She seems more furious than puzzled in that scene to me.

Slumber part? Or Slumber Party?
DalkonCledwin chapter 2 . 10/23/2018
Interesting start, I really should have read this sooner
HP-DG-SB-NR-RG-PN chapter 13 . 8/5/2018
Here's another story that I wish was updated again. I hope you'll come back to it. You're leaving behind too many good stories here. Come back and finish some of them lol.
Salamence989 chapter 13 . 7/3/2018
update?
BROMBROS chapter 13 . 7/2/2018
I can't wait for this story to continue.
BROMBROS chapter 10 . 7/2/2018
Now I know for sure that 2 of Harry's weapons were inspired by Hellsing.
DalkonCledwin chapter 4 . 5/17/2018
**SNORT** The Power Glove? I am afraid that Final Fantasy would want their accessory back P

EXTERMINATE! ANNIHILATE! DESTROY!

You should totally love that song, I suspect, yes? Also… I think Yang needs to have less Gamma Radiation Treatments at this point in time.
ClericalError chapter 1 . 3/28/2018
I read the first few chapters but I couldn't quite get into this. The descriptions were very upfront and felt generous in what they gave to Harry.
The back story of Talon, getting kidnapped by the Goblet of Fire, meeting Blake, Ilia, and Neo, etc could be very interesting, but when it was all presented up front it felt like it was just giving Harry all the things. If hints about these things were sprinkled throughout the story without bogging it down it could be really interesting and engaging, but the way it was presented just killed my reading momentum.
I love some of your other stories and really appreciate how prolific you are and how many different crossovers you take on.
Hopefully this critique isn't what you refer to as author notes in your profile, but is actually helpful to you.
starboy454 chapter 13 . 2/7/2018
excellent story so far
OBSERVER01 chapter 13 . 1/16/2018
i knew luna and nora becoming friends would be quite an experience for Remnant :)
Guest chapter 13 . 1/16/2018
- Hakon2feb
You're forgetting DNA samples.

We wet our lips with saliva. Saliva, which contains DNA fragments.

As such lip to lip contact would activate the DNA scanner and thus allow for "imprinting" on a specific individual.
EroSlackerMicha chapter 13 . 1/16/2018
hahahahaha
Luna causes Penny to need a reboot hahahaha. and the gynoid has a sense of humor. but yeah Luna's logic "System error!" "Manual reboot needed" but its a riot.
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