Can you make this ritsuka having relationship with another woman?(FEMSLASH/YURI) it was very rare story after all! even tought there was so many yuri fanfic picture out there! PLEASE!

You can tell whose opinions are worthless because they don't even recognize the GO canon source material for what it is. Lurk harder, dipshits.

As for you: A decent expansion on what was provided by Ristuka's background in the extra materials. Your grammar is hit or miss though. I suggest proofreading.

I'm interested. It's not really Mary sue but you need to tome here and there on some parts. But hey. Dont get discourage its still chapter 1. Looking forward to it.

I rather enjoyed this, so please do not be discouraged by others and continue on with the great work.

Silence in the pines: what do you expect this is fanfiction after all.

Ugh.. Another Mary Sue OC wish fulfilling fic..