Very well written and a pleasure to read.

excellent

Author San, You should delete Miyuki name in summary. This is basically Tatsuya x Mayumi fanfiction. People did't like this. If It's Tarsus x mayumi fanfic. Then You shouldn't include Miyuki name in summary.

this fic was amazing! thank you so much for writing it! i loved it and i hope you write other fics in the future like this one!

Paula and xoxoxo or whatever your stupid ass name is you both are trash.

Thank you very much for this fic. Hopefully I can read more TatsuyaxMayumi story from you in the future.

Good fic. Miyuki is trash and her hold on her brother is abnormal. Miyumi wins, good. For once at least.

nyesel gue baca ini fanfic,, main karakter nya jadi ampas

Booo! OOC! CLEARLY YOU FAVOR MAYUMI AND LIED TO US AND BAITED US! CLEARLY TATSUYA HERE IS SOO OOC TO LEAVE MIYUKI, THANK GOD FOR CANON!

wooowwwww you promised a very balance tatsuya and miyuki and tatsuya and mayumi fic buuutttttttttttttt you are trash and you are clearly biased don't make stories like this! trashy trash fic, hopeee you gone and never write again

To the guest that commented on my previous comments on Jan 5, my previous comments was mostly telling certain reviewers to stop trashing on the author ship in a very disrespectful way and since this the author want this fanfic to end in his own way the reviewers that I have mentioned act very unreasonably.

Also, I never insulted the author's grammar or writing skills because English is my second language too, if I somehow made it sound like I did then I'm willing to apologize.

If your opinion on my way talking to others still unchanged then please pm me so I could make everything clearer from my pov and avoid making the comment section of this fanfic into a massive argument

It seems there is certain kid named Valkrus here in Comment section. And It seems he doesn't Know How to talk others. So shut up Valkrus. I only made suggestions.

But Author san has other plans. So I stopped making more comments long ago.

Second thing :- Grammer error is quit common. Because Most of writers has English as their secondary Language. So I never make comment on grammer Mistake.

So stop talking like brat Valkrus

Aaaaand it’s over ;(
With a nice happy ending too, though! :)

Oof I have a final exam in 10 minutes and I’m here reading this :’)

Good story, but the ending was extremely rushed.