Reviews for A day with the twins |
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bmmbbmhmb chapter 1 . 4/21/2019 best ever! |
Golden Tiger93 chapter 1 . 7/27/2018 Oh, come on. We all know that Astrid is going to h we help him and they would be alone. Good job! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2017 Oh, that was hilarious! I loved it! Please write more chapters to this. You totally succeeded in "matching the style of humor and plot to the Netflix series". Good job, I'm looking forward to more from you! :-D -ThatGuyWhoAlwaysEndsHisCommentsWithA":-D" |
Mariah chapter 1 . 12/9/2017 ha hiccup sounded like he was having a great time funny. |
RainDragon28 chapter 1 . 12/10/2017 Really good idea! I loved it Okay, and don't get upset ('cause I would) but here's some advise for you to improve: When it's a different character's quotes, you should skip a line. That way it's clearer to the reader who's talking. Perhaps find synonims; you repeat the same word a lot (ex: hut and plan.). But other than that you really know the characters and their personalities. I know I had some trouble with that when I started... So congrats, that was great one-shot. Keep going! |
Meraki7734 chapter 1 . 12/10/2017 This was funny! I really enjoyed and it made me smile! Poor Snotlout though, I'm guessing he got the more painful pranks! I could just imagine the horror when they realized Hiccup helped prank them! |
humenwrecker chapter 1 . 12/9/2017 Good story |