I kinda see Sakura's overconfidence coming to bit her in the ass.

Will we follow Shirou and Illya or is it just gonna be Sakura? Because she is kinda dull.

Seriously hope Shirou has dropped his Hero complex and kinda went HF way with him abandoning it for Illya.

Hmm, wonder if he materialized UBW? And if not, how far along he has got.

Wonder if Illya is providing Shirou Mana/Prana like Rin did in UBW (Think it was UBW where they have sex to create a wireless path/or part of her crest forms a new circuit that can just recieve Mana), as that is Shirou's greatest weakness.

Very good Keep writing

it should be interesting to see where things go from here

so the grail war was completely skipped then?

to be fair, nobody in their right minds would ever want to fight in that kind of war

huh, i wonder what shirou will be like without sakura's presence

you know, I thought that this fic would start with Tokiomi marrying someone else, but instead it got much darker

Tldr too much OC trash

I like new Sakura

good chapter, looks like sakura become more and more confidence in herself, i will said that good and bad at the same time, the bad thing is she will lose the old good sakura inside her hearth. I wonder will servants playing an bigger role in this story?. Bye see you soon.

Ah man I'd love to the backstory for the shirou/Ilya pairing!

Ouch. I have to say I feel bad for this version of Shinji. So Shiro and Illya survived the war with Bazett. No word on what the servant lineup was though. Artoria is assured given the presence of Avalon. Gilgamesh is surprisingly absent. He would have survived Kotomine’s death given his physical incarnation and I can see him just letting the death of a trusted servant go unpunished.

I wonder if Shiro was properly trained and where was Gil when Kotomine was attacked.

what yours problems with russians?

Interesante historia pero estoy algo triste por la muerte de Rin .
Dado que tu historia se desarrollará después de la quinta guerra del grial cosa que es una lástima ; pero aquí podrían darle un gran giro como que está historia sea una apocrypha .
Una sujerencia ya no uses tanto flashback .
Espero que el shirou de tu historia esa el que convertirá en emiya-limited-zero-over