Reviews for At The End of Her Thoughts
GabrielLoud chapter 5 . 6/2
please continue
Guest chapter 5 . 3/12
Okay, so here’s me trying to piece together how this story went:

So Leni gains feelings for Lincoln (and by that, I mean she is in love with her brother more than a sister), and she soon becomes possessive of Lincoln from other girls. One day, while sending 9 different voice messages to Lincoln on her phone, she suddenly snaps and kills 2 girls (likely one of her sisters and/or a girl who she thinks will take Lincoln from her). Within 2 days, Leni kills the rest of her sisters and possibly the parents, and attempts to set the house on fire, before running away and presumably taking Lincoln with her. Leni then hides herself and Lincoln in an unknown place before she continues her killing spree.

Sam attempts to call Luna on her phone, but to no avail. She arrives at the Loud House only to find fumes coming from the kitchen started by a gas leak (Leni probably did this after killing her family except Lincoln), and she calls emergency services for help. Firefighters and Medics arrive at the scene, and the firemen enter the house only to find the dead corpses of the Loud family that Leni killed. Lori, Luan, Lola, Lynn Sr., and Rita are among the victims. Luna, Lynn, Lucy, Lana, Lisa, and maybe Lily were likely also killed but in a different location, or their corpses are just unrecognizable from the fire.

Later, 2 detectives interview Bobby about the incident. However, Bobby kills himself in the bathroom by stabbing his neck with a pen, although he does hint before his death that he was forced by Leni to help her kill the Loud family. A texting conversation between Clyde and Ronnie Anne is shown days before Leni begins her killing spree, about Leni and Lincoln acting unusual. Ronnie mentions a magma comic that had the title of this story, which Leni seemed to read and get the idea of killing off her family and anyone else who stands in her way in order to get Lincoln herself. In the present time of the major events, Clyde is unable to deal with everything that happened so far and shoots himself with his dad’s gun. One of the detectives interviews Sam Sharp, only for them to get attacked by Leni.

That is all I seem to know so far. I might have missed a few details, but overall I get the gist of what is happening here. I hope more gets added to this story and everything is explained at the end.
MrShade13 chapter 5 . 3/7
Omg I am loving this story and the cliffhanger on this chapter makes me want to read it to its finish!
heavy5comando chapter 5 . 3/6
What the hell is this? I don't even know what's going on? Is this still about Leni?
Guest chapter 5 . 3/6
These two years were worth the wait. My God, that was chilling. Please continue this work. I know MHA and RWBY has got your attention, but please finish this. It is gems like this that never finishes.
SelenetheNerd chapter 4 . 2/6
Jesus Christ, this was... calling it dark would be an understatement. Even still, masterfully written.
Tony chapter 4 . 3/21/2019
Hey I’ve stumbled apon this fanfic and i love and I’d like to know if you can continue it pls
nuuo chapter 4 . 2/3/2019
Story is shelved too, does it even need an ending?
Edgat chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
I give extra points for Mysterious Girlfriend X
nategoat chapter 4 . 1/18/2018
Shit this is good. I honestly am in love with this fanfiction. It’s getting so deep and fucked up.
MrShade13 chapter 4 . 12/30/2017
What is going on?! I love it! Please keep going!
XxSkullCandyxX chapter 4 . 12/28/2017
I really enjoy your work with this fanfic. Its smart, suspensful, and amazing. I hope you continue working on this brilliant story.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/28/2017
This is getting too real. What kind of things you are thinking as you write this? 10/10
Guest chapter 4 . 12/28/2017
My heart weeps. You took it, man. I know I will be sleeping with lights on tonight.
DragonZordPrime chapter 4 . 12/28/2017
I don't know what to say...I guess I'll just wait for the next chapter. Damn my nigga Clyde is dead
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