Burning the Script sounds epic. If you need my help with anything involving this story, feel free to contact me through other things I have such as Discord or other apps. Can't wait to see it, Lieutenant

Super fic ! J'espère que tu retrouveras ton inspiration car j'ai hâte à la suite ! :)

Great chapter!

Hi. I wanna ask that you will write like canon or not, because I hope this is different. Erza is really linked to Zeref, that would be so cool. Thank you

Awesome fic. I’m excited to see what happens next

First of all: Really LONG. And, try to keep Jellal in character, alright. Now, make up some of your own Stories and change some things that happened in the episodes, to be new and make some Readers laugh, and some cry. Also, you don't have to put Jellal in the same place as Erza all the time, you could make him be in a different place/position. And, you could see about making him say different things. For starters, start thinking what Jellal would say and how he would think. With Erza on the other hand, when she does show up, make her think more like herself, and make her say things like that. Erza is known to be on top on Battles and refuses to lose, Jellal is the same way, but keeps it to himself. Other then that, I'll PM you about the Spells. Ciao.

-Master

This is really good, I can’t wait to read more!

Thank you for continuing this idea. I have started a fanfic with the concept a few months ago, but was obstructed by hectic schedule, so I am glad that somebody actually took the time to do this.
First advice, try not to reproduce the exact scenes in the manga, for if readers feel too familiar, they would be bored. For example, the horn that Erza had in the manga is not necessary, because it is not compulsory that Jellal must be doing the same job as Erza at that time. Omitting that detail thus would make the writing less predictable and save you some work - you do not have to describe the horn. Some other details can also be omitted or altered to reduce the amount that you need to cover and also make better story.
Secondly, Jellal is starting to sound a bit like Erza. You should make him sound more cool-headed and less careless, though I think right now it is fine.
For the spells, try these names that are taken from World of Warcraft,
Fire:
Fireball (Just like its namesake)
Conflagrate - the target instantly catches fire
Fire breath (Just like its namesake)
Rain of Fire (Just like its namesake)
Lava Lash - charge your hand with a fire whip
Earth:
Grasping Earth Totem - Summon giant rock hand to catch your opponent
Earth Staff (Just like its namesake)
Wave of Earth (Just like its namesake)
Quicksand - make the ground weak.
or you can just copy Jura's and Richard (Hoteye)'s spells
Water:
I have nothing at the moment, but I think he would just be able to control a limited amount of water (minimum density and maximum mass).
Wind:
Some classic name: Tornado ..., ...Typhoon
or you can just copy Eligor's spells, I think it would be better.

AAAAAAh this is really good!

I think you should still have Mystogan be Jellal tbh. It'd be more logical, esp since it’s only Jellal's story that changed.

You could continue with Edolas Erza as both Mystogan and Faust's daughter and Edolas Jellal as the Fairy Hunter.

Hm... pretty good. You know, I like how the story went. And, when he passed out when the flash on red hair appeared. I can't wait until Erza Nightwalker shows up.

-Master

Jellal would not be called Oberon, or King of Fairies. Erza was called so because she was the strongest female in Fairy Tail at the time. However, Jellal should not be the strongest male in this story, for if he is stronger than Gildarts, or Laxus then he would be able to solo the early arcs, which is not good. Even so, I dislike the magic swap, if you intend to change Jellal's magic to The Knight as I interpreted in this chapter, because it is confusing his magic suddenly becomes a new one just because he is not brainwashed, so maybe you keep his magic but omit the stronger spells, keeping only maybe Meteor, Pleiades (Jiu Leixing),... It is important that you make him versatile, letting him use several kinds of magic during fights, for that feature of him was forgotten by Mashima in the series. Later in the story, you can let him learns the other spell to keep up with new arcs.
You would have to think up a very good reason why Erza Nightwalker betrays the empire, and what Mystogan does staying in Edolas, so as a safer choice, keep Mystogan.
You should spend some chapters on Jellal's life in and before Fairy Tail. These chapters could be flashbacks, if that is easier.
Every member of Fairy Tail has some kinks unique to him/her, so what is Jellal's? What role does he play in Fairy Tail? How do others view him?
Maybe, if possible, try not to reproduce the Tower of Heaven Arc, because it would be too expectable thus dull. All the other major events should be kept the same however.
Remember that unlike Erza, who is too righteous and stubborn to do politic, Jellal is very diplomatic, so his role would be completely different.

This is going to be an interesting story, first of it's kind here.

I look forward to see what you do with it

Please continue the idea Erza belongs to Zeref's side and Jellal is a ideal wizard.

Switcharoo between Jellal and Erza, lets see how this goes. If you're going to give Jellal A title, it should be Fairy King Oberon. The Male counterpart of Fairy Queen Titania. I know some lores.