Reviews for I was born a faunus |
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middernight chapter 9 . 1/6 arkos: were being attacked by the enemy ship jaung: AHOY MATEYS |
MrKeyFox chapter 2 . 5/18/2019 Well this chapter killed this Qrow just immediately figures your dumbass out which is just bad writing hence being called a dumbass. Nice writing 'Hamish' maybe the remake is better but looking at your other works I doubt it. Now flame me you filthy D-Lister. |
Oblivious IJ chapter 1 . 11/23/2018 Awwwww you so Cyut! ~ OnIJ |
I Lost My Name chapter 2 . 7/7/2018 Come back to correct the dialogue portions when you have finished the story. Capitalizations and such, the rest can be overlooked. |
chaosstratege chapter 24 . 6/19/2018 I wish you the best of Creativity to help your rewrite. I'm excited to read the new stuff. good luck and keep writing |
Dinosaurchicken chapter 24 . 6/18/2018 Oh well. I look forward to the rewrite. Best of luck. *Tips hat* |
Smashgunner chapter 1 . 6/18/2018 I recommend fixing your summary. You'll get more readers that way. There are spelling mistakes, and some letters aren't capitalized. So fix that and more people might give this story a chance. |
DeathSeeker96 chapter 24 . 6/18/2018 Nnnnooooooo |
merendinoemiliano chapter 24 . 6/18/2018 Best of luck, bro |
Disabled-doctor chapter 18 . 6/17/2018 Is that guy clay.,. |
Guest chapter 23 . 6/9/2018 No its good |
Disabled-doctor chapter 23 . 6/8/2018 I Actually like the story how it is |
Dinosaurchicken chapter 23 . 6/7/2018 Continue! Continue! PLEASE! |
merendinoemiliano chapter 23 . 6/7/2018 I would say to continue, but if you feel the rewrite, do so. Good work. |
ThePotatoFamine chapter 1 . 5/27/2018 Huge tip: don't misspell faunus in your title, summary, and watch your grammar and capitalization. We don't even get a name for your character and there's no real reason for it. You have potential to grow but please develop your writing habits and skills, and I'm not being mean, but they're quite bad. |