Took me some time to get through with everything, but I did it. But I think the extras should have been put in a extra fic. Well, whatever the story was great and I loved it. I hope you wil write more TKA fics, because there are barely any!

By the way, are in any of the tka discords? If not, maybe you should join (if you want, of course). :)

Honestly... I didn't like how it started. But as you can see, I've finished it to the end and I really enjoyed the journey. Naomi x Wang Jie Xi forever HAHAHAHA! Kudos to you, the author, for even finishing this fic. Too many times I have been disappointed but I give you my respect because of your commitment and you were able to tell a story while you were at it. I really appreciate it. I hope your future endeavors will be fruitful!

Ye xiu is such a troll

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow...,...

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Really cute fairytale! Not bad, YueHua xD

Will you be posting your Log horizon story here too? All the best for conquering your writer’s block!

Yay! It was a really pleasant surprise to see an update, and I really enjoyed reading these little extras of the work you put so much thought into! Thank you so much for all you're giving us!

I get busy and come back to see the story finished? A nice present for myself I guess. I find it funny that all those people were interested in dating her though, but a lot of people were shown to have an interest. I do wonder who were the interested persons, but I guess that’s why you left it open-ended.

I finished your fanfic in one sitting and found myself, a full day later, still thinking about it! Which just shows how much it's captured my attention, aha. (To the point I Really Like WJX and Vaccaria now and Am Convinced I need to main a badass Witch class too, going to try a few MMORPG)

I really like your OC (and all the others like Lin and Yuehua too!) and how you wrote out the narrative, I think it was well done. While in the beginning I skimmed over many parts just to get to more interesting parts I really started to enjoy myself halfway! I like how many accurate details were incorporated in, especially culturally. I enjoyed reading those little mandarin bits a lot. (I got to practice my meager mandarin and could really hear the characters, good job)

hmm, going on to characterization. I really liked the character she plays, both a magic caster and a weapon user! Always felt that was really lacking in a lot of mmorpgs, so I really enjoyed her interactions with other pro players. It never felt overdone or out of place especially with her job as an artist.

Relationships in this fic were done well too, all the friendships and family interactions just gave me this warm feeling to witness. (not to say I didn't ship her with wjx hehe)

Last chapter just left me brimming for moooore and also juuust satisfaction. It was just so funny reading the part where Ye Xiu with the support of the other pros in the chat tells the newbie to give up chasing Naomi XD

Double update! But it’s the end huh ;’) I will miss this no doubt Haiz. I actually didn’t know what to expect for the ending and I’m quite satisfied with it? Like it feels right. And since it’s open ended. I don’t have to deal w the dilemma on who I think she’s better together with. Like no disastification. Thank you so much for giving us this 65 chapters! IT WAS GREAT OKAY. I will reread it

Thank you Miss Chestnut for your hard-work & persistence to complete this wonderful story.

But to leave such a story open ended, there must be AU for it right? RIGHT!? D:
Such as one-shots of various pairings with Naomi or with a similar circumstance how might other characters respond/interact with Naomi. ;3

Any case, thank you once again & please let your plot bunnies flood your page with more magnificent stories.

P.S: I definitely would like to know who's the first in line (excluding Su Muqiu) or the twenty that's in that line. XD

Just finished reading the fic so going to leave a comment. Nice to see a King's Avatar fic. Though not 100% supportive of the White Robed Witch background Naomi's interaction with the pro players is quite funny. Also she gives a closer perspective of the fans' side which isn't as detailed in the regular story at times.

Hope to see more.

I hope the spa destresses Naomi, she deserves some kind of relaxation.

finally found a good fanfic for this series! ;w; I know that u haven't thought of Naomi with anyone atm but her interaction with WJX always makes me squeal so much xD (espcially when WJX seems to be there when she needs someone xD) her interaction with others are interesting as well.. especially with HWQ.. they look like siblings xD I like how her characters developed so far x).. AND THANK U FOR GIVING YIFAN A LOT OF LOVE ;w; this cinnamon bun need more attention ;A;. thank your for writing this! keep up a good work! n looking forward on ur next chap x3

- Love from Malaysia

I think someway somehow, she'd be able to get in to see Happy, but she's gonna get teased about her disguise.