Reviews for Phantasmal Blades
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4
update?
kerrowe chapter 7 . 5/2/2018
Thanks for the update at least. Thought this fanfic ended up silently dead.
That story is certainly a good reference if you wanted to tune your writing.
Hope everything else works out though!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/15/2018
Any updates soon?
Jlargent chapter 3 . 3/24/2018
By the way Lucina's Exhalt brand is in her LEFT eye not her right.
Writing Gunner chapter 6 . 2/25/2018
So, I like this story, it has awesome potential, but I do have a couple problems with it. Those being, inconsistency. Lucina seems to know Japanese some of the time, but not all of the time. Not to mention the shitposting part. She shouldn't understand a single Japanese word being thrown around. Two: And this is more of a nitpick question than anything, was swapping Persona's Eiha out with Lux deliberate? And a third thing, let's not do the shitposting again. While funny the first ti me, it'll likely get old fast, and just raise tons of questions involving Japanese culture. These are my suggestions, Take them as You will.
King O Fools chapter 6 . 2/14/2018
the shit posting

papa franku bless your soul

69/10
Jlargent chapter 6 . 2/2/2018
I would imagine Lucina having either flintlock pistols or a musket as her ranged weapon when she awakens her Persona.
ptl chapter 1 . 1/27/2018
So, now we have inter dimensional thieves that will traverse numerous worlds from the FE and SMT verses, possibly even Tokyo Mirage Sessions #FE.
Coral the Leviathan chapter 6 . 1/26/2018
Whoa whoa whoa whoa wait! Did you give Lucina the ability to use Dragon Veins?! If you did, it will be awesome and scary! “Will be” because it’s not done yet in the story, “awesome” because it’s Dragon Veins, and scary... well there are many effects that can be used from them. And Lucina doesn’t know how to use this power as of yet. Don’t know if it will be that easy for her

Anyway, since she brought Morgana to the real world earlier than he was suppose to, please oh please say this means she will help Shiho! If she sees her try to commit suicide, I can only imagine what would happen then.

Anyway, can’t wait for next chapter
The Dark Hour chapter 1 . 1/26/2018
Tbh, that realistic depiction of a group chat with friends (particularly when they shitpost) is kinda a turnoff for me. Even more because of the OOCness it had and how Lucina is just ok with it.

Still a good story tho and curious on where this going.
Carsty 16 chapter 1 . 1/6/2018
I like both games Fire Emblem and Persona 5 if for some reason I just found myself a new shipping so thank you I love that shipping now.
Kicklash chapter 5 . 12/27/2017
I am LOVING this story! I'd follow it, but I only recently acquired Persona 5, and I don't want this fic to outrun my own progress.
Tiamatio chapter 5 . 12/18/2017
Ok quick thing. I'm reading my stuff and I notice a bunch of typos here and there. I guess I was tired, so when I get the chance I'll edit these chapters so they're legible. Another thing I'll fix is the conversation system. I gotta agree with ferrowe. It's hella cramped. That's all I gotta say rn, I'm tired af.
Coral the Leviathan chapter 5 . 12/18/2017
Huh. Kind of expected a gasp from the boys when Lucina told them she was a princess. Maybe from Ann or Makoto. And you gave her a type of alias background. This will bring up a lot of questions. I find it a funny coincidence how Lucina met an elderly couple who had a daughter who was just her size and went to Shujin. Really, a weird coincidence. I can’t wait to see what happens next chapter
kerrowe chapter 5 . 12/18/2017
Still hard to read due to how crammed the conversations are formatted but, nice to see how you handled Lucina's lodging problems. I thought you might have ended up make her stay at Akira's place too.
The school student part was surprising as well actually.
Not sure how well you're writing Lucina's character though. Hoping I'll be able to better know once things start to differ from canon some more.

About your last notes though: You probably could leave the language issue alone without any problems and chalked it up to magic though, if you really need to explain it.
Since no guarantees of same world languages and such. Don't think there is a Britain in Lucy's home world after all.
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