Reviews for The Web of the Underworld
CrownClown1 chapter 3 . 5/11
Pathetic you should make more drama between amelia and Peter after all those years what you mean she couldn't trust him but she could sleep with him that's so stupid he needs more drama with amelia that she created on her own for not telling him about her being pregnant that's reason enough, your reason keeping everything a secret even tho you changed most of the story already is ridiculous WEE NEED DRAMA BETWEEN AMELIA AND PETER
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 3 . 4/5
Excellent work! I’d love to see more of this!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 4/5
Hm! Fascinating. So Ben, who is a Lycan unlike his brother who’s a Vampire, has a "contact" that knows of the information Peter might possibly have to change the tide of the war? Intriguing!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 1 . 4/5
Ooh! Interesting start!
Starlord Master chapter 3 . 3/30
Good story.

Which do you think is more dangerous: vampires or werewolves?
Starlord Master chapter 2 . 3/30
Keep up the momentum.
Starlord Master chapter 1 . 3/30
I love vampires!
Alex-Flyppy chapter 2 . 9/7/2019
This chapter was interesting and entertaining.

1. Peter travels on the Amelia Jet, and showed that like Amelia he also hates to travel by plane due to the 'Turbulences'.
2. Meeting Anya, the 120-year-old Vampira was something that baffled Peter, perhaps because he comes from an older time when you first met a Woman to enter into a 'Relationship', pitifully today in That day is no longer important in the Society of Humans, much less in the Vampires apparently.
3. The short conversation of Peter and Thomas made it clear that Thomas still Loves Amelia and that Peter really shows Affection and Concern for Amelia.
4. The fact that Amelia saved Peter's life as far as he was almost 'Killed' by a Lycan who he thought was his brother, proves that Amelia really has a Deep Interest or Love for Peter, since she being a Elder, you shouldn't show that kind of Protection for a 'Death Dealer' that is supposed to be 'Your Guardian'.

The appearance of Benjamin, Peter's brother, I liked very much, since in the end he said that he received that 'Information' that he told Lucian was from Peter himself, his Brother. Undoubtedly, both of them already know the 'Immortal Existence' of the other, and are playing a 'Dangerous Game' in the Improvement of both Races.

I hope to continue enjoying this Fic. Without more to say, Luck and Ja-Ne.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/2/2019
Update?
BadReader chapter 2 . 8/31/2019
Tasers should be part of his arsenal. The cables electricity fits with the websspider sting theme.
BadReader chapter 3 . 8/31/2019
So, the Werewolves killed Khaine and Ben's like... sure why not work with you guys and make you stronger? That way you can kill my other brother too! :/ Doesn't really sound like Ben. Maybe Ben should have died and you should have used Khaine instead. Give him a face scarred by silver. Leaves claw marks on the faces of the vampires he kills. Makes more sense than Ben.
Alex-Flyppy chapter 1 . 7/30/2019
Some time ago I had encountered this Fic, but sadly, I had forgotten the name of this Fic and I hardly found it.

First, I am pleased to see a Peter Parker in the Underworld, being a Vampire Progeny of Elder Amelia, and the Lover/Sexual Partner of that woman.

Second, Eeste Fic starts a few years before the events of the first movie.

Third, Amelia already had her Son David in the Nordic Coven, and Peter asked him why he was absent for a few years with Thomas, which she did not want to tell him (And it is due to protect his Son), and apparently, she he wishes to entrust that Secret and some others, since he asked her to return with her to Salvo after the mission entrusted to him.

Fourth, I am pleased to see that Peter has spiders with the Lycan Virus, more precisely with the Lycans strain bitten by William Corvinus, and not of the modern ones that can change Will. Thanks to his hard work for 30 years, he improved the Virus, transforming the Spider into a "Spider Wolf."

Fifth, it seems that Peter created devices very similar to his Spearweb or Lanza Redes like Spiderman, but these are responsible for firing Silver Bullets... It would be interesting to see him using them in a fight with the Lycan.

Now, I am very pleased to see that Amelia will be in the Harem of Peter Parker (Especially since she will not die in this Fic as she did in the Movie and in the Comic), but I did not expect you to also include the Beautiful, Sensual and Mortifera Selene as Peter's Lover, although both women being Warriors could get along thanks to Peter's intervention.

Although what surprised me a lot is to see that Lena of the Nordic Coven and even the two Vampire Lovers of Andreas Tanis, Grushenka and Olga, will also be included in the Harem... It will be interesting to see how you plan to include these two women next to Peter, since both were not physically powerful, since Selene in Evolution killed them very easily with just a couple of strokes.

I will follow this Fic very anxiously, and I hope you update it soon; Luck and Ja-Ne.
bloodline 69 chapter 3 . 4/7/2019
update some more chapters please this the book is interesting don't stop
ethan.lukkar chapter 3 . 2/7/2019
Magnificent chapter can’t wait for more please update soon
bloodline 69 chapter 3 . 1/17/2019
continue the story please add more chapters
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