OMG there is simply no end to your brilliance, is there? you've written this with so much eloquence, simplicity and depth.

Wow! This was so lovely. Thank you for sharing it!

I don’t often encounter first-person fic that draws me right in and leaves me wanting more, but this has done just that.

So sweet, and right on target. I love introspective Vegeta, how he's humbled by her love in the face of all his flaws. This is a perfect confession.

OMG this is soul-crushingly beautiful! your words and the way you wrote Vegeta's thought absolute perfection! You wrote him sentimentally but not sappy and I loved reading every second of it! AMAZING job !

Beautiful! I love the ending scene 3

That was so undeniably truthful and sincere, I would have thought you were in a room with him transcribing his words.

This is so cute!