wow.. this is different from other post TLJ Reylo.. It's Interesting..

wow..this is different from other post TALK Reylo..it's interesting..

It's a very good piece, but honestly I'm just not very happy to see him dead... so early. XD
It's great fanfiction, nevertheless. I'll keep reading it. ;)

I enjoyed your story very much. You have an excellent style, good pacing overall, good concept development, and character development. Complaints- You had a plot set up for a broader storyline and this story ended rather abruptly. I would have been intrigued to follow Rey's adventures through a lengthier adventure. There was no real climax. Again, with a longer story, that could be included more effectively. On a personal note, being a Reylo fan, I naturally wanted to see Kylo redeemed. His death was a surprise (which you were going for, of course) but made this an unsatisfying downer ending. That is my own expectation, not what you were going for, so not necessarily a flaw in your story, just my personal taste. I would heartily encourage you to keep writing!

Wow, really great job!

That was good! 3

Thumbs up!

That was very interesting and I really liked it. Thank you.

Nice story. I like the addition of a good bb9e but I like your ending even more. Great job.