Oh man, I desperately want to read the next chapter...Good thing I know where I can find a little preview. Awesome work, I really enjoy every moment of this serious. Please keep up this great work and finish it, your reader deserve this!

I love the turn of the events it is taking. We have meet the biker and the police, now we just need to learn who's who in this rural town. I'm definitely eager to find out how this whole story will continue. You surely did a great job with this chapter, that's for sure.

Nice, very nice. I love to follow Charles on his way to wherever it may take him, also we know that it is not looking too good for him where he is in the present. But that's his story and you go all the way with it. This is no half-assed attempt and that's what I like, the idea of a writer and how he proceeds his goal by delivering a story to the audiance. By the way, it's a very fitting title as well.
Please keep up the good work.

A fantastic chapter! I loved every part of it without exception and as much as I would love to see Lydia and Charles together, my guess is that you have different plans for the two of them. No matter how it will turn iut, I would love to read the end of this story.
I noticed some minor mistakes but nothing crucial. If you need a beta reader or editor, just ask. I would gladly help you out. Keep up the great work! No, really. Please keep it up, I really want to hear the end of this story.

Very nice chapter! I especially like the chemistry between Lydia, Charles, and Kathy. On the other hand, I'm also curious how far the search on Zootopia side will progress or if they will find Charles in the end. So many questions but just so few chapters left. Well, let's see what happens next.

Puuh...that's difficult...because I really, really, really liked the chapter. I loved the training, the fight, the first recording, the repair session of the two brothers and even the little hustle at the end...and believe me, I did my best to stretch my suspension of disbelief as far as I could but even that wasn't enough. I would understand Charles's behavior if he had done something so terrible, maybe by accident, that would have hurt or even killed someone. Something that would have been so devastating for Charly that he couldn't face his parents and siblings anymore. But that wasn't the case and I waited for something like this since I read the title of the chapter, I waited for something terrible to happen. I feared it would happen during the fight(Charles killed his opponent and he can't face Nick after he promised not to raise his paw again - yes I know, Nick made the promise in another context with Charles but it would have worked for me) or during their ride to the recording session or during the hustle(where they come in contact with real thugs, who claim that they hustle on their turf. Tiberius is injured and Charles can't do anything to help him).

All in all, I will definitely continue this story but as I told you, I would be honest with you if something bugs me.

Very nice, I have to say I liked both the exposition part at the beginning and the bar scene with the additional scolding of the boys. I also don't feel so well with the promise that was made towards the end of the chapter. That kind of thing doesn't work well most of the time. But I'm eager to see how the story continues.

A very good second chapter, which I like a lot. All of the hiking through the country side with the whole group reminded me and felt a lot like a great coming of age movie. I would even say that I get some serious "Stand by me" vibes from everything that's going on, in combination with some references and your own spin to the story of course. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter, I'm not the fastest reader but I try my best.
Anyhow, it's a great story and I hope the story keeps coming like this.

Nice new chapter! I liked all the little music references and how you managed to fit (and pun) so many of them into one story. Different genres, multiple artists, and I liked this all.

Tiberius and Charles seem to be getting the hang of... messing thing up here and there as well. It's nice to see how they've grown, though. Although, they could use more hindsight in leaving their little sister all alone.

The band being together is good as well. Each member with their unique personality, talents, and instrument. I love how each one kind of has a story behind what they do. Synthesizer? Nerd! Bass Guitar? Petty thief!

It all works!

And I saw the cameo and chuckled a bit at it. XD

All in all, it's going great!

Lovin' the interactions between the siblings and how their first day of summer was. I miss those lazy days where you could hang out with friends by a lake and tell all your troubles in serenity while causing more trouble as the day goes by.

The teacher seems like she needs to be fired for her dishonesty and bigotry, though. It's interesting to see how it's all coming together and the backstory of Charles and his family.

I've always liked the whole "big sibling defends the little ones" motif. So this is a good example of this. The interactions are good, the characters are solid, and the turnabout was well played. Bullies getting what's coming to them is very well deserved.

And to see a bunny doing this was even better!

Love this so far! Need more. Keep doing what your doing. Lisa xxx

A great first chapter and I'm already curious how the story of Charles will continue.

I really love that you put Sly's Zoosona in this. If you ever need a machinist Zoosona I know a guy. ;) Great Chapter I happy things may take a turn for Charles.

Great new chapter, Hammer :D