Months of waiting and we finnaly get an conclusion. It's an pretty good one. I'm looking forward to he sequel when will it come out ?

I'm speechless. Like, seriously, I loved this chapter so much I hate it lmao. The part where Tania's mother was shot right in the head gave me goosebumps. I could feel her pain when she lost what little family she has. And damn, I felt bad for Rowan. She nearly lost the love of her life, whom she cheated on, and saw him almost sacrifice his life for the entire world. This chapter just blew my mind. Anyways, I wish you well on the squeal, and I have no doubt it's gonna blow this story out of the water.

I like the time in to the season finnaly with Rowan's escape.

It's just one thing bothers me, That Rowan cheats on Leo. I do like them together it's just bother some to me that Rowan would do that because she honestly cares for Leo. We're supposed to root for Rowan and Sympthys with her but cheating on some you care for isn't something you should root for your characters. Rowan knows it's cheating and she's in the wrong.

But it still bothers me.

But I love the cliff hanger and I can't wait for the sequel

BPP: I loved the inner turmoil Rowan felt about opening herself up to Danny like that. It's hard to share those kind of details about your life unless it's with someone you're so close to.

Div: But he can also understand in some way. Both of them can sympathize with each other over their crappy situations.

Both: As always, excited for the next update!

I loved the chapter. I loved Jewel's cameo. I laughed a little

Noooooo! Why?
Please upload the new chapter sooner!

Great job. I love all the plot twists in this story! You're a natural!

I love how everybody's so worried about their precious Rowny. The nightmare certainly sounded severe, probably from major PTSD after everything she's been through. And I love how you wrote Donnie's situation with Timothy. Though I felt like it was more of his fault more than the turtles.

Div: Ikr? Like, dumbass you volunteered to be experimented on by the mutagen, and after seeing the mutants you saw, you STILL wanna look like that?

This was really good let me know if you need help or ideas with any chapter

Love it as much as the last one. Keep going!

More please, MORE!

"I prefer my bed and you ready to fuck me"?! Holly shit... We've got some dirty dirty thoughts here... But I like it
Is think this one of the best chapters ever! I love you and keep going :)

BPP: Damn, Rowan. I know she doesn't consider herself anything like Shredder, but she's doing the same thing that led to his downfall. The constant need for revenge and how vengeful she was with Karai. Even going so far as to let her be killed by a bunch of alien bastards.

DivaGlam: But you can also understand why she's so upset. All she had were Jewel and Karai left, and the latter betrayed her in a way no one else could. She ignored her parents deaths and was too blinded by the need to make her father proud.

Basically what we're trying to say is that this chapter was great. And we found it very debating when Leo finally snapped at Rowan to get over her shit and went to Karai's rescue. We're gonna pray for those two.

This story is The bomb. It's so fucking good I could almost cry. I fucking can't wait to see what happens next. Like, fucking shit, I wish you would update faster. The suspense is killing me! Also, I've binge read all your other chapters, and I must say, it started out like a trainwreck but then...fucking the bomb. Who's your Beta? Because I wanna fucking thank them for helping you make this story so damn fucking good. Fuck I love the word fuck!

This story is just so good...! But I have a question... What happened to Danny?

Ύ.Γ. Η ιστορία σου μου κράτησε παρέα στο καράβι...

BPP: Such a shame the date was cut short. And all because of the Kraang, no less. I thought the outfit sounded cute, and I know this is weird, but the golden eyeshadow reminded me of Cleopatra. I'm honestly getting fake goosebumps about the whole thing with those other two vampires. I just couldn't help but getting angry with them. Just leave her the hell alone!

DivaGlam: I have never seen a girl wear golden eyeshadow before. Well, not white girls at least. Because the ones we know have really pale skin like Rowan and it looks really awkward on them if it's not done correctly. But it was still sweet nonetheless. I kinda wish you wrote the part where they tell Xever's past and how he got recruited into the Foot Clan. I always found him as an interesting character. Also, I was honestly on Baxter's side the whole time. He's an ass, sure, but he was driven into this lifestyle because he was bullied and he's also weak.

We can't for more!