i started readig when chapter 16 came out and was hooked from start to finish i became a novelest myself and im proud to admit you are the reason why (but please dont make me give you a cut of the profit XD) thank you for inspiring me and making me realize my story could be loved by a wide range of people .

WOAH WOAH WOAH ...did anyone elese se that...in chapter 33 it says "the familar call of 'alright everyone'starts them off"...it's supposed to be 'ok everyone'...OK not ALRIGHT

This story has been a pretty good ride. Thanks for writing it.

I have to say this up front. I hadn't read any of your story till you published your last chapter. I'm a very rare visitor to this website, but something made me want to check and see if there was something interesting here, and your latest update was at the top of the list. I had heard of before, a long time ago and figured it was as good a time as any to check it out... What a ride I was in for! Really great writing. Sure, there were typos here and there but who cares? The story was amazing and compelling. There were both times when I laughed and times when I cried and plenty of tense moments as I watched some pivital point unfold. Great suspense throughout as you carried us through an ever-changing roller coaster that seemed to get more and more precarious as it progressed, yet bringing it all together in a very satisfactorally fulfilling way. Also, really great character development, especially Mizu, which I'm sure was a challenge to convincingly draw him out of the glitchy game-will from whense he came. One thing I was really hoping to see towards the end was how the Doki's would interact with people in 'our reality.' They did go by stores, and Sayori got a new counselor but was left with no interactive details. That would have been interesting. However this and any other set-backs are far out-weighed by the sheer magnatude of awesomeness and creative genious that was put into this compelling story. Thank you so much for the time and effort you put into this story.

When you consider the circumstances of the game, Monika is the first real victim. The script literally mind-hacks her, changing her behavior, her emotions and her perspective of reality. This drives her to terrible lengths, and she ends up paying for it later. However, you never forget that she was the first one whose files were altered: in her natural state, she's just a normal highschool girl, who wants to be loved. No one can fault her for that.

I'm really glad I came back to this story. That was one hell of a ride. A sudden thought came to me while I was trying to do the good ending of the game a few days ago and that was what urged me to search this fanfic. Good thing I easily found it. Thank you for this wonderful story. Until next time, Monty and gang.

I've been here since the early chapters, and boy was this quite the wild ride. There's always this sadness you get whenever a great story concludes, but I take solace in the fact that all of them get their deserved happy ending.

Till next time, LOVEchr crew. This was an amazing story. I'll definitely binge read this in one go soon, to experience it all over again.

A great story which took forever but was certainly worth it in the end. I applaud your work and perseverance where many before have failed.

Thank you for answering the time question I had.

I might suggest Monty not use that laptop ever again but keep it safe in a safe or something. Don't go playing other games on it as he might end up with aliens or demons next time.

The only real unanswered question is who or what was the being which had seemingly been in Monty's head and turns out wasn't. Was it the essence of the game itself? Was it God? There are so many potential things it could of been. Perhaps whatever it was, helped Monty and Monika escape that second time as it had been satisfied in Monika's answers and Monty's resolve.

I look forward to whatever may come in the future.

I... Jesus Christ that was an emotional rollercoaster of ups and downs. And two whole years... That's some amaz commitment. Holy shit team salvato need to hire you at this point...

*clap clap clap* amazing. Thanks for the roller coaster of emotions. And what you said is the same for me. I have about 300 one shots of me and Monika. Hehe

I started this story yesterday and finished it 3 hours after you posted the final chapter. I just couldnt look away, i became so engrossed in the story. The last few chapters had me on the verge of tears. Reading about Monika falling away from the computer as Monty went through nearly broke me. I'm glad I started reading it when i did. You did a very good job and congratulate you on finishing a story nearly 2 years in the making. You certainly deserve time to relax and take a break just as the characters have. I do hope to read some of those one-shots you have in the back of your mind. You've made me care about these characters in ways only a few fics have done before. Thank you for writing and hope your future projects of any kind good just as well

Well, that was one hell of a ride, and a good one at that! But I'm mostly glad that you enjoyed writing this story over this one year and a half span as much as I enjoyed reading it, and I'm more than happy to see it finally come to a sweet conclusion. And without much to add, I wish you the best for you and your future stories!

Happy for them. They deserve the happy ending.

This ending, it puts a smile on my face.

And may that horrible game burn alone without the girls, mc, or Monty in it. I'm so glad you came back to finish this.