Reviews for Happy Ending?
TheOkWriter chapter 5 . 5/18
This actually an interesting story.
AssassinAkame chapter 5 . 3/11
I just found this amazing story and it is amazing! Please! Please continue it! I know it has been a while but I really wish for the story to continue.

Kudos!
lucj chapter 4 . 1/31
hans?
dreaddragonknight chapter 5 . 9/4/2019
Interesting info
dreaddragonknight chapter 4 . 9/4/2019
This chapter seems to be totally disconnected from what was written in the previous chapter, from Oz’s knowledge of Ruby to the general passing of the thing. It felt like I was suddenly reading a different story with the same premise
dreaddragonknight chapter 3 . 9/4/2019
Well that escalated faster then I expected
dreaddragonknight chapter 2 . 9/4/2019
An interesting perspective on Ozpin’s little spiel, though how are the heroic spirits able to be separated from Ruby considering this appears to be the magical girl version of things where installing is a thing?
dreaddragonknight chapter 1 . 9/4/2019
I don’t really get some of your choices like Paracelsus but I also don’t play Fate Grand Order so I also haven’t really any problem with them so long as you are aware of where your going with them
sondowth chapter 5 . 6/30/2019
Please update soon
martin.mahendra2301 chapter 2 . 1/10/2019
The ability to summon and posses heroic spirits so you're going with two mechanics instead of one pretty interesting approach a few typos here and there otherwise keep up the good work
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 12/31/2018
AH... Ruby is Nasu-ed. Also, Eli-chan as berserker? This I gotta see... AAAAND she is just angrier than usual.

Also, Eli-chan has an excellent singing voice. The only problem is that she rates her success by the number of people she knocks out with her voice.
BerserkBookWorm chapter 4 . 12/30/2018
This is awesome! I repeat this is awesome! I haven't watched Fate/Stay Night, but it adds really cool elements to the story when you connect it to Ruby's semblance. There are so many possibilities for this! Ruby wields her semblance so effortlessly, changing between heroic spirits fluidly. I guess now Ruby is going to have to learn to work in a team and rely on other people rather than just herself (more like her selves). Maybe her spirits will talk some sense into her. I'm loving this, and I can't wait to see where it goes if you decide to continue this!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2018
In my opinion the gun shooting gun would be the weirdest. Ha!
LuBu081 chapter 5 . 11/1/2018
Not sure if you're aware of this or if it's just Ruby being left out of the loop but Jack has something like 80,000 souls, not 1,000.
Another little snippet of info is that E rank is considered ten (or was it twenty?) times peak human physical capability, so if the fastest runner on Earth maxes out somewhere around 25, a servant with E rank agility could hit 250 mph, alot faster than Remnant's cars, so Atalanta should be easily capable of running faster than a car for a long time with her x40 () speed, and that's not even counting the possibility (whether you've taken it into account or just decide to not bother with it) that these ranks would be fluent in regards to their value compared to Humans in Remnant. If that E rank speed or strength takes into account physical feats of the most peak Hunters and Huntresses (as they're Humans, Faunus included or not being irrelevant), then you see where I'm going with this. Since the Throne of Heroes is a Multiversal Extra Dimensional area and that Ruby is able to pull Heroes from it with her Semblance, then it makes sense that the rankings would account for the variety of Human capability in various dimensions, including Remnant.
Immortal ninjaaa chapter 4 . 11/1/2018
So summer had similar abilities to ruby? Nice to see that you’ve changed up the groups a little.
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